second one isnt that bad..
i wont be sugar coated, ill give you some constructive criticism..
the first one shouldnt be so blue.. colourize it less.. i give it a 2.5/10
open it and press CTRL + U and tone the 'saturation' down..
the font is too squished and make it smoother.. its too sharp..
second one isnt that bad, more of a 4.5/10, just make the font smoother.. next to the font size in photoshop there is drop down box with sharp, crisp, smooth and stuff.. try different ones..