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Ok so im writing something right, and here's the situation:

Character A walks away, Character B slaps Character A across the face, Character A makes a surprised sound...

I can't figure out the surprised sound. I want to put it in quotes on the next line, then on the line after that explain why the slap even happened and such and such. A lot of people are going to see this, and I just cant figure out what to do.

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