Silberio Posted February 18, 2010 Share Posted February 18, 2010 Howdy. Well, first of all, I was thinkin on naming the topic "*FREE BEER*" to get more attention, but whatever. After that stinkin' low grade joke, I would like to post some of my poetry, or something like that. Y'know, I ussually write my Verses and poetry in spanish, so those little piece's are kind of... mediocre' (If that's the word). Anyway, here it is: This is what's called "Free Poetry" AFAIK, as that kind of writing doesnt need to follow classical poetry rules. You are everything 28/01/2010 Where can I go? I just love you You know it is true So, where can I go? Nowhere Just leave me here I am the one who’s gone I am the on who loves you Just don’t le it be a broken hearth Tell me, who’s gone? Yeah, I know it’s me Nevertheless, it could be you For without you, I don’t exist And without myself, I‘m me gone However, without me, you aren’t anymore For I can’t think on you You are me and I am you We need each other Like the river needs its water Like the bird needs the sky Like eagle needs its eyes You are mine I am yours Like the tree needs someone’s view For the trees sing when you walk And they sing for you For your happiness For you are a virgin For me, my princess The time in my space The eyes of my soul The light in my wine Fire Everything ---------- This shit... *Ahemm*, this "writing" is closer to classical poetry- There is no way out There is no one around You love is biting me right now There is no one around I am on my own I need your love Girl, tell me now I'm gone I am gone forever Gone For nighttime while Have fun for my time Going to come back? Never I have the will However, you get me twice Girl, I love you I got the will I am all yours Just to tell me I will get through Just tell me ‘Cause I need you Love me Listen to me Love me Just gone with the wind And the sea sparkling’ your name The rain tasting your lips Feeling your hips Smile this day, because I am gone Away, away, away I am taking my way If you follow me, I turn alone I get back to your hearth And on to my dreams You are my rose I am your thorn You are part of me And I am part of you ‘Cause I love you ‘Cause you’ll love me Don’t bring me down Don’t take me out Sweet girl, your mine Let me get down your line -------------- Now this... this is a song I wrote in 4/4, key of E with a slight Country tempo. Look, around yourself, don’t you feel alone? Well, I do, but I am on my own And I don’t know how I make it through All the day long with my blues True love will never die That’s why I can’t forget you, even if I try For you are my only love Don’t leave me wounded, all alone ‘Cause even if the morning was cold Or I was running through the storm I would always see you again I never had to wait But now, you’re farther away from me Even though its just a few blocks away Who’s smile am I going to see? Every morning, day after day Yeah, it seems so easy for everyone Having what they want and need all the time But I have to stay alone in the tide And I guess I wont fall in love anymore Getting your love seems so hard But Jesus walked on the water one day Sometimes I think my hearth will tear apart And that my soul is going to wither away -------- Hope you've liked it, Lord bless ya all, cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool_dude Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 U rock u got a great talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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