The spelling mistakes are pretty less, so I ignore those, leave it.
I would say this was a good one, but there are some conceptual mistakes, if you see the storyline of the game.
Like :
Here comes a feeling that these two guys don't know each other, but in the storyline, Madd Dogg comes to know that his own missing rhymes are with OG Loc, etc etc.
Plus, You expect Sweet to bang Madd Dogg's head?