The Children of Satan

[Jezz Torrent]

i guess a script i wrote would relate to my creativity

ok, so i finished the script to my movie and i want critique. i would really appreciate it if some members could read it and lemme kno what they think. i kno its long but its really good!

thanks

Warning!

Script contains violent material, language and disturbing content. Do not read if you are easily offended!

Scene 1, Village (Introduction)

Spain, 2006

(Villagers walking around the area)

(Jorge walks wheelbarrow to barn)

(Juan stacks hay)

(Isabella stirring food over fire pit)

(At church)

(Lio, Rosalie and Julio kneel and pray)

Samuel: (Runs to Isabella) Mama, over the hill! Savages! There’s a whole group of them coming this way!

(All villagers in area get up and run to the top of the hill)

(A large group of about 500 people walk towards the village)

Juan: Who are those people?

Jorge: I don’t know, but they’re not coming through our land! (Walk down hill to them) Stop right there!

(Group stops walking)

Jorge: This is our land. You’re not welcome here! You must head that way (Point) if you would like to pass.

Miguel: I’m sorry but you may not keep us out of this place, as it is not your land.

Jorge: It is. I am in charge of this village. This is my village and these are my people. I can prove to you that this land is legally owned by us.

Miguel: It may have once been owned by you, but as of now this is our land. (To his Cult) Gentlemen, unpack here at this village! It now belongs to us!

(Cult shouts and cheers)

(Miguel turns around and looks at Jorge)

Jorge: What!?

Miguel: (Snaps fingers) Mendez!

Maniac: (Walks up front to Jorge. Stabs chainsaw into Jorge’s belly)

(Villagers gasp)

Maniac: (Turns on chainsaw and cuts through Jorge)

(Villagers screaming and running away)

Miguel: Get them you lazy bastards!

(Cult runs to village and attacks villagers)

Maniac: (Saw off villager’s head)

Cult Member: (Grabs villager, pushes her in the fire pit and holds her there)

Cult Member 2: (Beats up villager severely and slams his head into doorknob)

Maniac: (Saws off villager’s legs and puts his upper body upside down in the water)

Cult Member 3: (Takes ax and dismembers villager)

(Only a few villagers remain alive. They all stand in the bottom floor of a tower trapped)

Miguel: (Fires gun into the air. Walks to front of Cult and looks at remaining villagers) Restrain them.

(Cult members tie up remaining villagers)

Miguel: Lock them in the torture shed. Get them to join the cult.

(Maniac starts to walk them to the shed)

Miguel: And any of them who do not agree to join the cult, kill them.

Maniac: (Nods and turns around. Pushes villager and takes them all to the shed)

Miguel: There are more hiding in this village! Find them and do the same to them!

(Cult cheers and shouts)

Scene 2, Mountains

(Class hikes through woods and mountains)

Mrs. Abigail: Come on class, keep up! If anyone needs a break just let me know!

Richard: (Out of breath) This trip is so ####ing gay. I don’t know why I came.

Daniel: I’m having fun. I’m just so tired.

Richard: Same here. If ####ing Mrs. Abigail would slow down and give us our lunch break, I’d be fine.

Daniel: I know, dude. ####ing bitch, man.

Richard: Yeah.

Daniel: Richard, I can’t walk anymore. (Sits down) Tell her to stop.

Richard: Mrs. Abigail!

Mrs. Abigail: What? (Stops and turns around)

Richard: Daniel needs to rest!

Mrs. Abigail: (Looks at watch) We just stopped!

Richard: (Shrugs)

Mrs. Abigail: Okay. Class, we’re gonna have a 5 minute rest here! If you have to go to the bathroom, you’d better do it now!

(The class sits down)

Sierra: (To Sarah) So, how long have you been going out with Matt?

Sarah: Only a few weeks. He’s a great guy.

Sierra: Yeah, I’m sure. Where is he, anyway?

Sarah: He went to take a piss.

Sierra: Ah. Okay then…

Sarah: Yeah. I wanna get back home. This trip sucks ass.

Sierra: I know. I only came to get out of school.

Sarah: Me too.

Matt: (Walk to Sarah and hug her) Hey babe.

Sarah: Hey. (Kiss him)

Mrs. Abigail: Separate, you two! (Turn around)

Matt: (Flips her off) Shut the #### up, you stupid bitch!

Sarah: Lets just ditch the class. Lets go explore somewhere else and we’ll find the class later. Want to?

Matt: Sounds cool with me.

Sarah: Sierra?

Sierra: Fine.

Sarah: Cool. (Start to walk with Matt to Richard)

Sierra: But Sarah, if anything happens, I’m blaming you.

Sarah: Right. (Walk to Richard) Richard, we’re all gonna ditch the class and explore. Do you guys wanna come?

Richard: (Look at Daniel)

Daniel: Yeah, what the hell.

(All sneak away from the class and explore mountains)

Matt: I swear to Christ, I’m gonna kill that bitch of a teacher! I hate her!

Richard: I know, dude. She’s always yelling at me in front of the whole class.

Matt: That sucks that you have her everyday.

Richard: Yeah.

(Group walks into mists and fog)

Daniel: (Shivering) Why the hell is it so cold all of a sudden?

Matt: Shit man, it is cold. (Puts jacket on)

Sierra: Guys, I can’t see.

Matt: Me neither. I don’t think any of us can.

Richard: I can’t see more than 10 feet in front of me.

Matt: Shit, we’re lost. ####!

Sierra: Goddamn it, Sarah!

Sarah: Hey, none of us forced you to come.

Sierra: It was your ####ing idea! And now, look what happened! We are lost!

(Group stops)

Richard: Okay, just cool it! We will find our way back. Sierra, yes it was Sarah’s stupid idea, but you didn’t have to come. Neither did I, nor did Daniel. But we did and now we’re in it together. Okay?

Matt: Guys, we have to call Mrs. Abigail and tell her.

Daniel: No way! Are you ####ing crazy? We’ll be in so much trouble!

Matt: Would you rather die out here? There is nothing around here. If we don’t call, we could die out here. At least if we call now, they’ll have a better chance of finding us because we’re not that far off.

Richard: Okay, if you haven’t noticed what we’re surrounded by, I’ll point it out. Mountains! We are in the mountains. No cell phone is gonna work out here.

Matt: ####. Well, lets climb to the top of this mountain. Maybe we’ll get reception up there.

Richard: Don’t count on it, but okay.

Matt: Okay. Lets go.

(Group climbs mountain)

(Group gets nearly to the top in 2 minutes)

Matt: Shit!

Sarah: Babe, what’s the problem?

Matt: Well, the top is right up there. (Points straight up) But I can’t reach it.

Sarah: (Sighs) Richard!

Richard: (Climbing up) Yeah?

Sarah: Hurry up here! I need you to help Matt get to the top of the mountain.

Richard: Shit! I’m stuck on this rock!

(Sierra climbs up)

Sarah: Is Daniel down there with you?

Daniel: Yeah, I’m here. I’m helping him out. Don’t worry.

Sarah: Okay. (Go to Matt)

(Matt sits against mountain wall)

Sarah: Maybe my brother can stand on your back and we can all climb up.

Matt: Oh yeah. Put all the weight on me.

Sarah: Well, you’re the strongest one.

Matt: (Stand and look at wall) Yeah, I think we can do that.

(Richard and Daniel climb up)

Matt: Richard, you’re gonna climb on my back. I’m gonna stand up and hopefully lift you all the way up to the top, and we’ll create a ladder for everyone else. Okay?

Richard: Okay, sounds good. (Get on Matt’s back)

Matt: You ready?

Richard: Yeah.

(Matt stands up lifting Richard to the top)

Richard: I’ve got the top.

Matt: Thank god! Okay babe, you first.

Sarah: Just climb up like it’s a ladder?

Matt: Yeah.

Sarah: Okay. (Climb to top)

Matt: Sierra. (Nod her over)

(Sierra climbs to top)

Matt: Daniel, your turn.

Daniel: Okay. I hope you can support my weight, right?

Matt: Will do. Go on.

(Daniel climbs up)

Matt: Richard, I’m climbing up.

Richard: Okay.

Matt: You gotta support my weight, okay?

Sarah: Don’t worry. Me and Daniel have got him.

Matt: Okay. (Climbs up)

Sarah: Shit! I’m losing him! Matt, get up here, now!

Matt: I’m coming. (Climbs up and grabs onto Richard) Okay, you ready?

Richard: Yeah.

(Matt and Daniel pull Richard up)

Matt: Hew. (Pull out phone) No reception. Damn. Does anyone else have reception?

Daniel: Nope.

Richard: (Nods)

Matt: Babe?

Sarah: No.

Matt: ####!

Sierra: Hey guys, look. (Pointing to village below mountains)

Matt: What is that?

Richard: Looks like a house…a bunch of houses.

Sarah: Maybe they have a phone.

Matt: That’s possible. They probably do. Lets go check.

(Group hikes down mountain)

(Back at the class)

Mrs. Abigail: (Stops walking) Okay, everyone sit down. I’m gonna do a quick head count.

(Class sits)

Mrs. Abigail: (Counts heads) Okay, I missed a few of you! Matt, Richard, Sarah, Daniel, and Sierra! Where are you all? …Raise your hands! Oh god! Does anyone know where they are?

Student: Last time I saw them was 20 minutes ago. They were hiking away from the class.

Mrs. Abigail: What!? Why didn’t you tell me?

Student: I don’t know.

Mrs. Abigail: Shit! We’re heading back this way, and hurry! We need to find them!

(The village)

(Group walks to house)

Matt: (Knocks on door) Hello? Is there anybody home? Hello!? …####. I guess no one’s home.

Daniel: There’s tons of other houses. Wanna check those ones?

Matt: Okay. You and Richard head down that way. (Point) Me, Sarah and Sierra will stay in this area. We’ll meet back here in a half hour.

Daniel: Okay.

Richard: Lets go. (Walk off with Daniel)

Matt: Well, lets move.

(Door opens slowly)

Matt: (Quickly turn and look at door)

(No one is there)

Matt: Hello? …Hello? …Is there somebody there? …Should we go in?

Sierra: I don’t know. This place is creeping me out.

Sarah: Okay, look, we’ll go inside for 5 minutes, check if they have a phone, use it, then we’ll be out of there.

Sierra: Okay.

Sarah: (Look at Matt) You first.

Matt: Of course. (Walk in quietly. Turn to girls) Shh. If there is someone inside, I don’t wanna disturb them.

Sarah: Okay, just go!

Matt: Okay. (Walk in quietly)

(All walk inside and close door)

Matt: I’ll check downstairs. You two go upstairs. Be quiet and for god’s sake, be careful.

Sarah: Okay. (Walk upstairs with Sierra)

Matt: (Walk inside kitchen and look around)

Sarah: (Enter master bedroom)

Sierra: (Go inside office and walk to typewriter) How ####ing old is this village?

Sarah: (Look on dresser and in cabinet. Walk inside master bathroom)

Matt: (Enter guest bathroom. Plug nose) Holy shit. (Open toilet lid)

(Crap and fly are inside toilet and the seat is extremely dirty)

Matt: (Gagging. Walk out) Oh my ####ing god.

Sarah: (Comes up behind Matt)

Matt: (Gasps)

Sarah: You okay?

Matt: Yeah. I don’t think anyone is in this village. Seems abandoned.

(Light turns on)

(Both look up)

Cult Member: What the hell are you doing in my house!?

Sierra: (Hears and looks up)

Matt: Oh my god. Sir, I am so sorry. I thought it was abandoned. We were looking for a phone. (Cuts into Cult Member’s dialogue)

Cult Member: You were looking for a phone in a ####ing place you thought to be ####ing abandoned? You’re full of shit, you little faggot!

Sierra: (Sit by top of stairs and watch)

Matt: Sir, your door was unlocked. We thought it was all right.

Cult Member: Don’t change the subject on me, pussy! You’re a dead man, and that’s the way it has to be!

(Maniac quietly walks behind them with chainsaw)

Sierra: (Notice Maniac) Matt!

(Matt and Sarah turn around)

(Maniac starts chainsaw and swings it. Cuts into wall and swings around in a circle)

Matt: Shit! Run!

(Both run past Cult Member)

(Sarah runs upstairs)

Cult Member: (Hits Matt hard in the back with a bat)

Matt: Ahhhh! ####! (Fall to ground and turn over)

(Maniac walks up to him)

Matt: Wait! Dude, just hold on!

Maniac: (Lift chainsaw)

Matt: (Block face with hands) No! (Screaming)

(Maniac massacres Matt with chainsaw)

(Sarah and Sierra run into master bedroom and close and lock door)

Sierra: (Cries hard)

Sarah: (Cries a little) It’s okay. We’re gonna be fine.

Maniac: (Chainsaw through door)

Sierra: (Screams)

(Both get up and run)

Maniac: (Runs by and cuts off Sierra’s head)

Sarah: (Shut door on Maniac)

(Maniac sticks chainsaw through end of door)

Sarah: Ahhh! (Let go of door and run)

(Sarah trips and falls down the stairs)

(Maniac grabs her and drags her away)

(Richard walks along path talking)

Richard: So, yeah, my mom is the senator for New York and my dad is in the NYPD Bomb Squad. My sister, Sarah, she works at the hospital. She’s a cook there. I’m currently unemployed but I hope to get a job this summer. Why did you wanna know? …Daniel? (Look)

(Daniel’s gone)

Richard: Oh shit. Daniel! Daniel! Where the #### are you? Daniel! ####!

(Noise in tree)

Richard: (Look up at something in the tree)

(Something big a dark lies in the tree)

Richard: Daniel?

(Daniel’s bloody body falls out of the tree)

Richard: Ahhhhhhh! Daniel!

Maniac: (Walk in front of Richard with chainsaw. Start the chainsaw)

Richard: (Screaming and running away) Help me! Somebody! Sarah! Matt! Help! (Continue running)

Maniac: (Chases him to torture shed)

Richard: (Run inside torture shed and shut and lock door. Look around)

(Dead body hangs from hook in middle of room. Torture weapons lay everywhere. Dead body lies on floor with blood around it)

Maniac: (Put chainsaw in between doors and cut_

Richard: (Turns around then ducks)

Maniac: (Saw through lock and break in. Walk to back of shed and climb up ladder. Walk around second floor of shed. Jump back down and look behind barrels. Notice dead, naked, out of place body in dumpster. Turn around and look at dead body on floor. Walk over to it and flip it over)

Richard: (Dressed as dead body on floor) No! (Pick up wood and hit Maniac)

(Maniac falls back)

Richard: (Get up and hit him again, then drop wood and run outside shed)

Maniac: (Chase close behind him)

Richard: (Running. Turn around)

(Maniac hits Richard in face with back of chainsaw)

(Screen blacks out)

(Back at class)

(Class walks around looking for missing students)

Mrs. Abigail: Richard Springfield! Matt! Sarah! Where are you!

Student: This is where we took that break. I saw them walking off that way. (Point)

(Walking noises in distance beyond fog)

(Class turns)

Maniac: (Walks into view and starts chainsaw)

(Class screams)

Mrs. Abigail: Oh my god! Run!

(Class begins running away)

Maniac: (Chases class. Catch up to a student and cut off his arm. Push his head into tree. Run after another student and cut her leg off then massacre her)

Mrs. Abigail: Over here, you ####ing prick!

Maniac: (Turns around and chases teacher)

Mrs. Abigail: (Picks up rocks and throws them at Maniac. Trips on tree root)

Maniac: (Pick her up and stick her head in a hole in the tree)

Mrs. Abigail: Ow! Help! (Screaming)

Maniac: (Saws off her body and walks away)

(Movie title appears and screen fades out)

(Opening credits)

Scene 3, Car

(Jason, Jack, Enrico and Jose sit in car)

(Jason sits in back seat and Enrico drives)

(Spanish music plays)

Enrico: So, Mr. Americans, what really brings you two to this part of the world? Tell us.

Jason: It’s confidential. Besides, even if it wasn’t private, it’s not your job to know. You’re being paid to guide me around the area. Nothing more.

Jose: Why is it such a secret?

Jack: Just tell them.

Jason: All right guys. Our assignment is to search for the missing son and daughter of an American senator, Dean Springfield. They were with their class on a high school field trip but then they disappeared.

Jose: I heard the whole class is gone.

Jason: We’re not 100 percent sure. We’ll let you know as soon as we find out.

Enrico: I heard the same thing about the whole class having disappeared.

Jason: Well, we did lose contact with the teacher, but it could be just because they’re in the mountains. Possibly a weak signal.

Jack: (Pulls out picture of Mary)

Jason: Who’s that?

Jack: My wife, Mary. I’m gonna miss her.

Jason: Don’t worry, we won’t be here that long.

Enrico: There’s a house coming up on the right. Do you wanna check it out?

Jason: Ah, what the hell. Pull over.

(Enrico pulls car over)

Jason: (Get out of car and go to driver’s window) I’ll be right back okay. I’m just gonna check out this house.

Enrico: Okay, Jason, just go. We’ll be waiting here.

Scene 4, Village

Jason: Okay. (Pull out gun and walk towards house tactically but fast)

Cult Member: (Watching Jason through window. Walk away)

Jason: (Walk through open door and into main room. Notice man poking fire. Holster gun) Oh, shit. Excuse me, sir. I’m sorry, I thought this house was abandoned. (Walk to him)

(Cult member doesn’t turn around)

Jason: I was wondering if you’ve seen a class of high school students around here? … (Pull out photos) Have you by any chance seen the kids in these photos?

Cult Member: (Stab fire poker into wooden floor and turn around and look at Jason) Who gave you the right to come into my home, gringo?

Jason: (Doesn’t understand Spanish) Sorry to have disturbed you.

Cult Member: (Pick up ax and swing it at him)

Jason: (Jump back and pull out gun) Freeze!

(Cult member keeps walking)

Jason: Stay back!

Cult Member: (Raise ax)

Jason: (Fire gun at cult member’s face)

(Cult member falls to ground and dies)

Jason: (Breathing) Holy shit. Son of a bitch. (Walk around corner to door)

Julio: (Pin Jason against wall and hold knife to his neck) Who are you?

(Jason dropped his gun)

Jason: What?

Julio: Who the #### are you?

Jason: I don’t understand Spanish!

Julio: Who are you? Are you one of them?

Jason: One of who?

Julio: The La Tiniebla Cult. Are you one of them?

Jason: No goddamn it! (Push Julio on ground and pick up gun and aim it at him)

Julio: (Drop knife) Don’t shoot, please! I wasn’t sure if you were one of them. They killed most of my people.

Jason: Who’s “they”?

Julio: The La Tiniebla cult. They took over our village. They killed several of my people. I got away from them.

(Jason aims gun down)

Julio: (Get up and walk in main room. Notice body) Shit. Mister, you have to hide this body.

Jason: Why?

Julio: If they know you killed anyone in their cult, they’ll torture you!

Jason: Okay. (Holster gun. Drag body and put it in cabinet) Now, sit down and explain to me what exactly is going on.

(Both sit)

Julio: The La Tiniebla Cult took over our village a few days ago. They’re a popular religious cult group in Europe. Have you heard of them?

Jason: No.

Julio: Well, they are an extremely ruthless, devil-worshiping cult. They will kill anybody, anyway without hesitating or feeling guilty in anyway. (Starts to cry softly) They killed my mother. In our village, we had about 100 people. A few short of 30 remain alive and good. The others are either dead, or part of the cult. They’re forcing my people to join their cult. They have the others locked up and if they refuse to join, they’ll be sacrificed.

Jason: And how did you get out?

Julio: I was the only one able to escape. When they first started taking over, I was up at the church. I heard the fighting and I took off.

Jason: Okay, I want you to hide somewhere and keep me informed. You know this village well, correct?

Julio: Of course. I’ve lived here 16 years.

Jason: Okay, good. (Hand him a radio) I want you to hide somewhere and keep me informed via radio, okay?

Julio: Okay. I’m gonna take off right now. (Start to climb out window)

Jason: Wait. What’s your name?

Julio: It’s Julio.

Jason: Okay. I’m Jason.

Julio: Nice to meet you. Holler if you need me. (Start to leave)

Jason: Julio.

Julio: What?

Jason: (Pull out and show him pictures) Have you seen the children in these pictures?

Julio: Yes, I’ve seen them before.

Jason: Oh, great! Where?

Julio: (Sigh) The cult has them.

Jason: What!? Shit! Do you know what they might do to them?

Julio: Do you really want me to tell you?

Jason: ####. I’ve gotta move. I’ll call you later. (Run to front door of house and open it)

Cult Member: (On other side of door. Swings ax at Jason)

Jason: (Falls back to dodge it. Shoots and kills cult member)

(Cops in car stop what they’re doing and look up)

(Large crowd of 100s of cult members rush to area with weapons)

Enrico: Holy shit!

Jack: Can we get through them?

Jose: Not a ####ing chance. Enrico, get us the #### out of here!

Enrico: (Trying to start car) The damn thing won’t start!

Jason: (Walk outside and notice the cult members) Oh my ####ing god! (Aim gun) #### it. (Run inside and shut door. Pin chair against door to keep it shut)

Enrico: (Tries to start car) Come on you son of a bitch!

(Car starts)

Cult Member: (Running to car) Get the #### out of my village! (Swing ax at car and damage headlight)

Enrico: (Reach out window and shoot and kill cult member. Back up fast. Accidentally hit side of wooden bridge)

(Part of bridge collapses)

Enrico: ####! (Backing up too fast. Drives over cliff and flips car into stream)

Jason: (Looking out window. Turn around) Shit!

Cult Member: He’s in the house! Get the ####er! (Running towards house and kicks door)

(Locked door doesn’t budge)

Jason: Shit. (Runs to window, open it, and run outside and hide)

Cult Member: (Breaks door down with ax)

(Tons of Cult members run inside and tear apart the house)

Cult Member: We know you’re in here you son of a bitch!

Cult Member 2: He got Juan. The ####er got Juan!

Cult Member: Find the mother-####ing gringo, and kill him!

Cult Member 3: He’s not in here!

Cult Member: ####! Search every inch of that ####ing forest! He’s here somewhere!

Jason: (Quietly run away from area. Run all the way to main village. Notice people and hide behind bushes)

Jack: (On radio) Jason, do you copy?

Jason: (Grab radio and respond) Jack?

Jack: Yes, it’s me. We’re all right. No serious injuries to all three of us.

Jason: Oh, that’s great. What the hell happened?

Jack: We tried escaping those people but Enrico missed the bridge and drove right over the cliff. We’re fine, but there’s two problems. A: We no longer have a car, and B: the bridge is broken. We’re trapped on this side of the area with all these crazy people.

Jason: Shit! Are you guys all okay?

Jack: Yes. We got away from those people and now we’re trying to find you. Where are you?

Jason: I have no idea. I ran about a half-mile north from that house I was at and now I’m at a strange village. There’s more people here, but they seem normal. Where are you?

Jack: We traveled east up the river and climbed out a couple miles up. We can’t see anything that looks similar to a village. We could go back to the house and travel north but that’s not wise at all. Plus we should move because those people might know we’re over here and if they catch up to us, we’re ####ed.

Jason: Yeah, I hear you. Okay, we’ll, I’m at a village, and I’m looking at about 10 villagers living like normal people. I’m thinking they maybe normal.

Jack: Maybe they are normal. Are you gonna ask them for help?

Jason: I will in a minute. After I confirm that they’re normal. I’m gonna snoop around their houses and find out.

Jack: Okay.

Jason: Do not call me for while, because I don’t want my radio going off while I’m snooping around. As a matter a fact, I’m just gonna turn off the radio, okay?

Jack: Okay. Contact me after you’re done searching the area.

Jason: I will. (Turn off radio and put it away. Observe villagers)

(Cult member organizes hay. Cult member 2 brings wheelbarrow to barn. Other members walk around)

Jason: (Sneak around back and into house number one. No one is inside house. Look through cabinets and boxes)

(Nothing but normal items are inside)

Jason: (Look out window)

(Cult members setting up wooden posts near unlit fire pit)

Jason: (Sneak to other house)

(Wood is nailed onto house covering the doors and windows)

Jason: (Try to pull off wood from window)

(Wood won’t budge)

Jason: Shit. (Use knife to pull out nails. Climb in window after pulling off wood. Look out window)

(Cult members hang hook over fire pit)

Jason: What the hell are they doing? (Search house and find old tools, broken glass, and rotting wood) Hmm. These people seem normal to me. (Sneak outside and climb onto the roof of the house. Sneak into next house’s top window. Notice blood stained bed. Turn on radio) Jack, do you copy?

Jack: Yeah, Jason, You done searching?

Jason: No, but I found something interesting. I found a bloodstained bed. That could be normal right?

Jack: In a village like this? Probably, because this place is in the middle of nowhere, someone could’ve given birth in the bed.

Jason: Yeah, that’s possible. I’m still gonna assume the worst, just to be cautious.

Jack: Good idea.

Jason: Okay, I’m going offline again. (Turn off radio and put it in pocket. Walk downstairs and turn corner)

(Dead villager woman is pinned on wall with pitchfork in her head. Blood all over wall. Flies buzzing around dead body. Woman’s face is completely deformed)

Jason: Shit! (Plug nose) That’s not normal. (Investigate body)

Rosalie: (Screaming loud) Help! Help! Somebody help me!

Jason: (Run to window and watch. Notice about 30 cult members outside) Oh shit.

Cult Members: (Cheering. Shouting continuously) Sacrifice! Sacrifice! Sacrifice!

Rosalie: (Screaming. Being carried to hook by cult member) Help me, for god’s sake! Ahhhhhhh!

Cult Member: (Put Rosalie on hook)

Rosalie: Ahh! (Gagging)

Cult Member: (Pour lighter fluid in fire pit and light match)

Rosalie: (Weak voice) Please…don’t.

Cult Member: (Mimic her) Please don’t, please don’t. (Drop match and step away)

(Rosalie screams and cult members cheer and shout)

Jason: (Sighs and turns around)

Cult Member: (Right behind him. Throws a punch)

Jason: (Ducks)

Cult Member: (Punches wall) Ahh, ####!

Jason: (Kick cult member and push him on floor. Draw gun)

Cult member: (Pulls out knife and cuts Jason’s leg)

Jason: (Fall) Damn it!

Cult Member: (Get up and start to stab Jason)

Jason: (Shoot cult member and get up and look outside)

(Other cult members alerted and planning something)

Jason: Shit. What are they planning?

Cult Member: (Walks towards house with ax)

Jason: Shit! (Push dresser in front of door and lock door)

(Cult members bang on wood covering window)

Jason: Son of a bitch. (Run over and push bookshelf in front of window)

(Cult members raise ladder to upstairs window and window shatters)

Jason: (Look upstairs) Shit! (Run upstairs and notice ladder. Go to ladder and knock it over)

Cult Member: (Break top of door with ax and climb into house) He’s upstairs! (Run upstairs)

Cult Member 2: (Climbs in and pulls pitchfork out of woman’s head)

(Woman falls to floor)

(Cult member 2 runs upstairs)

Jason: Shit! (Shoot them both in the head. Notice shotgun against wall and bullets on desk. Pick up shotgun and bullets)

(Ladder rises to window again)

Jason: (Go to window and fire shotgun at cult members below then push ladder down)

(5 more cult members run upstairs with melee weapons)

Jason: (Shoot them with shotgun)

(Last cult member that’s shoot is only wounded and still lives)

Jason: (Kick cult member against wall and slam shotgun stock into his head)

(Cult member’s head splatters)

(Ladder rises to window again)

Jason: (Turn and look) ####! (Pull out pistol and run to window. Shot cult members below and shoot up the ladder. Reload)

Cult Member: (Begins to climb up damaged ladder)

(Ladder collapses and cult member falls)

Cult Member: (Get up and point to window) Kill that mother-####er!

(2 cult members break into window behind Jason)

(1 is a woman with a knife and one is a man with a sickle)

Jason: (Turn around and chuck knife into woman’s head. Kick sickle out of man’s hands and break his neck. Take knife out of woman’s head and pocket it)

(Miguel and Maniac watching fighting from church)

(Church is a little ways away)

Miguel: (Turn to Maniac) It seems the new members are having difficulty containing the American pig. I would say, “Give them some time” but they had their chance to prove themselves useful to me. Mendez, go kill the cop. Oh, and make sure no more members get killed while you’re at it.

Maniac: (Walk away)

Jason: (In house being over powered by cult members)

(About 10 cult members surround Jason)

Jason: (Gun is out of ammo. Punches cult members)

Cult Member: (Slice Jason’s arm with knife)

Jason: ####! (Reload gun and shoot cult member and dive out of broken window. Run over to locked door and try to open it) Damn it!

(Cult members run out of house towards Jason)

Jason: (Turn around and shoot cult members)

(Only a few die)

Jason: (Try to shoot gun which is out of ammo) ####! (Start to reload)

(Locked door behind Jason opens)

Jason: (Gun still unloaded. Turn around and scream and run away)

Maniac: (Starts chainsaw and chases after Jason)

Jason: (Running away as fast as possible. Trips and drops gun. Gets back up in a hurry and runs away leaving gun behind)

Maniac: (Chases Jason to lake a half mile away)

Jason: (Jump into lake and swim to floating logs in the middle of the lake. Climb onto log)

Maniac: (Run to water and walk in. Start to get chainsaw wet)

(Chainsaw sparks)

Maniac: Urgh!

Jason: You can’t get me without getting that wet! It’ll electrocute you if it gets wet!

Maniac: (Get out of water and look at Jason)

Jason: (Looks back and breathes very hard)

Maniac: Arrrrggh!

(Back at village)

(Cult members fix and clean up)

(Bell at church rings)

(Cult members stop what they’re doing and drop tools)

Cult Member: What’s going on?

Cult Member 2: I think he’s calling us to the church.

(Cult members walk in door to the tunnel)

Cult Member 2: Lord Miguel. (Walk in door and shut it)

(Bell continues to ring as camera films creepy things in church such as: an up-side-down cross. locked rusty gates, and the La Tiniebla Cult symbol)

(Creepy music plays)

(Screen fades out)

Scene 5, Church

(New cult members sit in church)

(Miguel stands at alter)

Miguel: Now, what the hell happened this afternoon? You promised me your best performance. You can’t even bring down a ####ing cop! One cop against 20 of you, and you still couldn’t ####ing stop him! I had to send one man, Mr. Mendez, to stop him. One man can do more than 20 of you. If I ever see this sort of poor performance ever again, all of you will have your heads chopped off! Is that ####ing clear!

Cult Members: Yes, Lord Miguel!

Maniac: (Walks into church and goes to Miguel. Bow to Miguel)

Miguel: Did you do away with the American?

Maniac: (Nods head)

Miguel: I am very disappointed. My second man cannot ever stop a goddamn gringo!? (Pull out sword) I should just kill you myself, you worthless piece of shit! Now, go back out there, and kill that ####ing cop, before he finds the prisoners!

(Moment of silence)

Miguel: Now, damn it!

Maniac: (Grabs chainsaw, gets up and walks outside)

Scene 6, Village

Jason: (Using hands to paddle logs to side of lake. Gets to the side and climbs off the log and out of the water. Pull out knife and radio. Turn on radio and try to work it) Jack… Jack, do you copy? …####. Jack please respond… Jack? …Jack? … (Looks at radio) ####ing piece of shit! Urgh! (Pause) Well, this radio’s no good to me anymore. (Drop it) ####. (Walk tactically into shed next to lake)

(Nobody is in shed)

Jason: (Open drawer and find handgun bullets) Oh good. (Look in holster. Remember dropping gun at the village. Slam handgun bullets on door) ####! (Punch wall lightly. Look at lighter on table and put it in pocket. Glance around the rest of the shed then walk out with knife out. Walk towards trees)

Cult Member: (Walking towards Jason but doesn’t notice him)

Jason: (Hide behind tree)

Cult Member: (Walk past tree)

Jason: (Try to sneak up behind him but make noise)

Cult Member: (Turn around)

Jason: (Slit his throat)

Cult Member: (Slowly fall to ground and die)

Jason: (Search cult member for items but don’t find anything of use) Damn it. (Continue walking through forest. Come across house and sneak in through back door. Walk through kitchen into dinning room and living room. Walk into sitting room and into guest bathroom and look around. Go around behind the stairs and walk into guest bedroom)

(Severely massacred woman and man lie on the floor. Gallons of blood and body parts scattered across room)

Jason: (Gasp and fall to knees)

Maniac: (Walks into view as suspense music plays. Hit Jason in head with sledge hammer)

(Screen blacks out)

A few hours later…

Jason: (Wake up in a different smaller house and hold head in pain. Start to pull out knife but then notice it’s gone) Oh shit. (Pick up baseball bat laying on floor and walk down hall way towards front door)

Maniac: (Burst through front door with chainsaw)

Jason: (Startled. Turn around and run back to dinning room and shut door. Run to guest bathroom)

Maniac: (Saw through door and enter dining room. Walk around room. Pull cloth of table)

(Dishes fall on floor and break)

Jason: (Peaking through crack in door)

Maniac: (Look at lower cabinets then saw through them. Saw through higher cabinets. Notice Jason in bathroom)

Jason: (Run through bathroom to living room and turn corner into entry way)

Maniac: (Block door and try to cut Jason)

Jason: (Duck and run up the stairs. Go into bedroom on right and lock door)

Maniac: (Walks up the stairs)

Jason: (Hide under bed)

Maniac: (Saw hole in door and unlock door and walk in. Go to closet door and kick it down. Search inside closet and cut through clothes. Walk out and look around room. Walk onto of bed)

(Moment of silence)

Maniac: (Saw through bed and into floor right next to Jason)

Jason: (Climb out from under bed and swing bat)

Maniac: (Cut bat in half)

Jason: (Drop other half and run through bathroom and start running through next bedroom)

Maniac: (Saw and run through wall right in front of Jason)

Jason: Shit!

Maniac: (Cut Jason’s arm)

Jason: Ahh, shit! (Run back into bathroom)

Maniac: (Run back through wall and cut him off)

Jason: (Run back into bedroom)

Maniac: (Run back into bedroom)

Jason: (Run back into bathroom)

Maniac: (Run back into bathroom and cut him off again. Raise chainsaw)

Jason: (Look in mirror and notice window behind you. Jump backwards out window and fall to ground outside) Ahh! (Get up slowly and turn around)

Maniac: (Right behind him. Punches him)

(Screen blacks out)

Scene 7, Torture Shed

Jason: (Wake up in torture shed)

(Jason and Luis hang from hooks with handcuffs)

(Dead massacred bodies lie scattered throughout torture shed)

Jason: (Breathing hard) Holy shit. (Notice Luis. Kick him lightly) Hey… Hey! …Wake up. (Kick him again)

Luis: (Wake up suddenly) Who the #### are you?

Jason: I’m Jason. I’m a police officer from the United States. And you?

Luis: My name is Luis.

Jason: What brings you to a godforsaken place like this?

Luis: I was hiking in the mountains out here when I noticed the village. The people here are crazy. They spotted me and hunted me down, then they brought me here.

Jason: That’s pretty much what happened to me. You said you were hiking in these mountains right?

Luis: Yes, sir.

Jason: Did you happen to see a high school class in the area?

Luis: No.

Jason: I’m looking for a class that disappeared out here. There’s two very important kids in that class that I need to protect. I might need some help. You interested?

Luis: I’m interested in saving my ass, but I will try to help you along the way.

Jason: Great, thanks. I also ran into a villager named Julio, only he was normal. He was gonna help me but I haven’t seen or heard from him in a while. I’m a bit worried. My radio is damaged so I can’t contact him or the rest of my team.

Luis: That’s not good. I wish I could help you there, but I don’t have a radio.

Jason: Shit. Well, they first thing we need to do is get off these ####ing hooks and out of this ####ing slaughterhouse.

Luis: I agree. How exactly do you plan on doing that?

Jason: Can your legs reach the floor?

Luis: No.

(Cult member quietly walks towards and into torture shed but Jason and Luis don’t notice)

Jason: Damn it. Well, we could try to…

Cult Member: (Loudly dragging ax and walking towards Jason) Kill the American cop. Kill him.

Jason: Shit, get ready!

Cult Member: (Raises ax)

Jason: (Kick cult member)

Cult Member: Ahh! (Fall towards Luis and cut his handcuffs)

Luis: (Drop to ground and punch Cult Member in the face)

(Cult member drops ax and holds head)

Luis: (Cut off Cult Member’s head)

Jason: Okay, well, that worked out well. Now get me down.

Luis: Okay. (Drop ax and kneel under Jason) Okay, now!

Jason: (Stand on Luis’s back and lift yourself off of hook and jump off)

Luis: (Stand up)

Jason: Thanks. (Kneel down and hold cuffs on floor)

Luis: (Swing ax and cut cuffs) No problem.

Jason: Do you have a gun?

Luis: No. Do you?

Jason: No, I lost mine.

Luis: Shit. Well, I’ll try my best to help you find those students. I’ll see you around.

Jason: Okay, bye.

Scene 8, Village

Luis: (Leaves building. Walk up to main village where shootout took place. Sneak into 2 story house and watch cult members talk around fire)

Cult Member 1: What is Lord Miguel planning on doing?

Cult Member 2: I hear he’s gonna try to get as many of the villagers as possible to join us.

Cult Member 1: What about that cop?

Cult Member 3: He’s in the torture shed. Hernando went to kill him just now. He should be back soon.

Cult Member 4: And the other 3 intruders?

Cult Member 2: Lord Miguel sent a few guys up the river looking for them. No luck yet.

Cult Member 1: Is Lord Miguel planning on corrupting the school students we’ve captured as well?

Cult Member 3: Anyone we’ve captured, we’re gonna try to corrupt them.

Cult Member 1: So why isn’t he going to corrupt the cop?

Cult Member 3: He knows the cop wouldn’t give in. He’s loyal to his country and people.

(Maniac starts to sneak up behind Luis)

Cult Member 4: Where the hell is Hernando? He should’ve been back by now!

Maniac: (Start chainsaw)

Luis: (Turn around and duck)

Maniac: (Saw through the wall then turn around and chase him)

Luis: (Run outside and run south past cult members)

Cult Member 1: (Hit him in the back with a hammer)

Luis: Ah! (Keep running south. Run past a small shed)

Maniac: (Saw and run right through the shed and continue chasing Luis)

Luis: (Run all the way to river and jump over edge into river and run east/upstream)

Maniac: (Chase after him)

Luis: (Trip and fall over and try to crawl away)

Maniac: (Catch up to him and cut off his leg at his shin)

Luis: Ahhh! (Screaming in pain) ####! Ahhh!

Maniac: (Pick up Luis’s leg and put it in pocket. Attack chainsaw to chain on belt. Pick up Luis and put him on shoulder. Walk to church with Luis on your shoulder)

Luis: Ahhh! Help! Jason! Jason, help! Somebody help! (Continues screaming)

Maniac: (Walk upstairs in the church and into room. Drop him on floor)

Luis: Argh! Damn it!

Maniac: (Walk out of room and put hand on door knob)

Luis: (Weakly) No, wait! Wait!

Maniac: (Shuts door)

(Screen blacks out)

(Jack, Enrico, and Jose walk through woods and search area)

Jack: What the #### is his problem? He said he’d call!

Jose: What if they captured him?

Jack: I highly doubt that. You don’t know Jason. He doesn’t get caught. He gets into some deep shit, be he gets out of things. I am worried though.

Enrico: I don’t remember walking through the woods in the middle of no where in the assignment description. I thought we were supposed to drive out here, rescue those little shits and get out of here.

Jack: Would you shut the #### up and stop your bitching?

Enrico: Yeah, whatever you say, captain.

Jack: (Stops and pulls out map)

(Rest of group stops and goes to look)

Jack: Okay, we’re here. He said the village was a half-mile north of that house. We’ve traveled from here to here, where we are now. Shit, that’s ####ing like 2 ####ing miles. We’re lost.

Enrico: Oh, uh, obviously.

Jack: ####. He said the village is somewhere around this area. Lets head there.

Jose: I don’t think that’s a good idea.

Jack: Yeah? And why is that?

Jose: Think about it. Jason said he’d call us after he was done searching there. It’s been like 6 hours. I don’t think its taking him this long to search. Something happened at that village, something bad.

Jack: Okay, I do see your point, but we gotta rescue him. We have to go to that village, no matter how horrible things are there. We have to investigate and rescue the senator’s children anyways. We may as well get the hard part out of the way.

(Back at the village)

Jason: (Sneak into village and into tall tower in village. Notice villagers walking around as you sneak into tower. Climb up ladder and look out window at villagers talking. Notice radio) Oh, thank god! (Pick it up and switch to proper channel) Jack, do you copy?

Jack: Jason? Holy shit, is this you?

Jason: (Turns down radio) Yes, and you have to whisper, those cult members are right outside the building I’m in.

Jack: Okay. Why the hell didn’t you contact us?

Jason: I got in a shootout with the cult members. They obviously weren’t normal. Then out of no where, a large man with a ####ing chainsaw chased me to a lake, so I had to swim to get away from him, and my radio broke.

Jack: Shit. Well, at least you got this one now.

Jason: This one isn’t portable.

Jack: ####. Where should we meet?

Jason: I don’t know yet, but whatever you do, don’t come to the village.

Jack: Why?

Jason: You’ll find several horrible things and wish you hadn’t. They burned a woman alive the please the devil.

Jack: Jesus Christ! Who the hell are these people?

Jason: I only know what a kid I ran into a few hours ago told me. They’re called the La Tiniebla Cult. They worship the devil and that’s all I know.

Jack: We’re dealing with more than we expected. How many members do they have?

Jason: I have no idea. But I know the numbers are increasing because they’re forcing the villagers to join their cult.

Jack: Shit. We can’t bring down this whole cult with just the four of us. We need the goddamn army.

Jason: Well, until then we’ve got to contain them on our own. Where exactly are you?

Jack: We don’t know. We’re lost. We were headed to the village, but not anymore I guess.

Jason: Good. Well, I’m gonna contact Julio. I’ll call you later. (Switching channels) Shit, which channel was his radio on? (Thinking back)

(Flashback of when Jason handed radio to Julio)

Jason: (Switch to proper channel) Julio, are you there?

Julio: Jason? Where the #### have you been? I’ve been waiting around almost 6 ####ing hours! You told me you’d contact me ####ing sooner! What the #### is your problem?

Jason: Calm down. My radio got damaged and they captured me. I was unconscious for a few hours, but I’m fine now. I won’t be able to take this radio with me, so we’ve gotta talk as much as we can now.

Julio: Okay. We can start with, where are you?

Jason: I’m in a tower in the village.

Julio: Okay, I know where you are.

Jason: Are you near the village?

Julio: No, I’m a few miles from the village. I want us to meet up.

Jason: Okay, where?

Julio: Look out the window of the tower to the left and you’ll see a church. Correct?

Jason: Yeah.

Julio: Now look down and you’ll see a small building with a wooden sliding door.

Jason: Yeah.

Julio: That building has a half-mile long tunnel that will take you all the way to the church. Take the trail on the right side of the church and walk about a mile and a half until you get to a very large body dump. Work your way around the body dump and continue another mile until you reach a barn. I’ll be inside that barn.

Jason: Gotcha. Do me a favor.

Julio: What?

Jason: You know these woods pretty well, right?

Julio: By heart, yes.

Jason: Okay, I need you to switch your radio to channel 9 and contact my partner Jack. He’s a police officer, and I want to meet up with him and the others. I need you to give them directions to the barn, okay?

Julio: Okay, will do.

Jason: Thanks. (Turn off radio and grab pitchfork. Climb down ladder and quietly sneak outside tower and walk around left side to the back off the tower. Lean up against wall the turn to face the right side of the tower. Start to walk that way)

Maniac: (Suddenly walk into view as loud and sudden music plays. Walk past Jason but don’t notice him)

Jason: (Gasps quietly)

Maniac: (Walks away)

Jason: (Sneak into building and close door quietly. Search the room for trap door. Pull open trap door and walk through tunnel to church. Walk past church)

(Time passes)

Jason: (Walk to body dump)

(Body dump is a huge ditch in the ground that looks like a mine, and it is filled with hundreds of bodies)

Jason: (Plug nose) Ugh, holy shit. (Walk around body dump holding nose)

(Time passes)

Jason: (Sneak to barn and notice cult member. Sneak up to him and stab him with pitchfork. Drag his body into barn and shut barn door. Set pitchfork against wall and drag body behind haystack. Push haystack onto body to hide it. Go back and pick up pitchfork) Julio… Julio, you in here?

Julio: Right here. (On second level of barn)

Jason: (Turn around) Hey, are you okay?

Julio: I’m fine. I was a little worried but I’m fine now.

Jason: Okay, did you get a hold of the others?

Julio: Yeah. They’re on their way.

(Jack, Enrico and Jose walk through woodland)

Jack: (Walking and aiming gun. Trip on tree root and drop gun over cliff) Argh! Damn it! ####! (Kick tree root) Please tell me you guys have your guns.

Jose: All my equipment was in the truck.

Enrico: Same here.

Jack: Shit. (Pull out knife) Lets go.

(Group keeps walking)

Jack: Can’t you worthless bastards do anything right?

Jose: Sorry Jack. It happened so fast I didn’t have time to react.

Jack: I’m mostly talking about Enrico. Can’t even drive onto a goddamn bridge without ####ing up.

Enrico: (Pin Jack onto tree) You know what…!

Jack: (Push him back and punch him onto floor)

Enrico: Ah! ####!

Jack: Shit. (Help him up) I’m sorry.

(Back at barn)

Jason: Did they say how far away they are?

Julio: They were about 4 miles away. They should be here any minute now.

Jason: Okay. When they get here, I wanna know exactly what the hell’s going on here.

Julio: Okay. I’ll explain everything. They’re here now. (Looking out window)

(Jack, Jose, and Enrico walk into barn)

Enrico: (Shuts door)

Jason: Jack! (Walk over to him and shake his hand) Thank god you’re all okay.

Jack: We were thinking the same about you.

Jason: I’ll bet. Jason, this is Julio, he’s the one that will be in touch with us and support us.

Jack: Hi, this is Jose and Enrico.

Julio: Hi.

Jason: Umm, where’s your gun?

Jack: (Disappointed look on face)

Jason: Shit, Jack!

Jack: It won’t matter as long as we can still get out of here. Which we can do right?

Julio: It’s not that simple. They’ve got roughly 900 cult members and Maniac Mendez.

Jack: Who’s Maniac Mendez?

Julio: I don’t know if you’ve seen him, but Jason, he’s the large man with the chainsaw.

Jason: Yeah, we’ve had a few run-ins.

Jack: Who is their leader?

Julio: Miguel Sanchez. He’s quite a pussy, but with all his men, he’s one of the most powerful cult leaders in Europe.

Jason: Where can we find him?

Julio: I honestly don’t know. He always moves around. My guess would be the mansion, but that’s miles from here.

Jack: What exactly happened in this village?

Julio: The La Tiniebla Cult took over the village. They killed thousands of my people, and are forcing the remaining villagers to join their cult. That’s why the cult is getting bigger.

Jack: And they’re a devil-worshipping cult, right?

Julio: That’s right. The unexpected happened to us. We thought our village was blessed by god. But we were wrong. This place…it’s cursed.

Jack: What…what do you mean “cursed”?

Julio: There is something here, something evil! That’s why a devil-worshipping cult took over. Our village wasn’t really blessed. If it was, a devil-worshipping cult wouldn’t have taken over.

Jack: Look, kid, there is no such thing as God, the Devil, or hell, or any of that shit, so please talk serious.

Jason: Jack, just listen to what he has to say.

Julio: That was actually about it.

Jason: Where are they holding the students and your villagers?

Julio: If I knew, that would’ve been the first thing I told you. (Pauses) Honestly, I don’t know. My guess would be the torture shed.

Jason: No, I was just there. There’s tons of dead bodies but no sign of any hostages.

Julio: Well, then obviously they weren’t there. What we need to do is split up and search different parts of the whole village.

Enrico: Woah, woah, woah, that’s not a good idea. None of us are armed. The most we have is pepper spray, a knife, and that goddamn pitchfork.

Julio: Well, if you wanna spend the whole week in this village, be my guest.

Jason: There’s bound to be some sort of tools in this barn. Lets gear up and we’ll split up and search the village. We only have 4 working radios correct?

Jack: (Count the people) 1, 2, 3, and 4, yeah.

Jason: Okay, I’ll go with Julio, the rest of you guys split up. (Pull out map and point to locations) Me and Julio will head back to the village. Jack, you investigate the area around the church. Enrico, You head down here to the lake. I saw some houses worth checking out there. Jose, you search the area around the torture shed, which is somewhere around here. Does that sound good? Can we do it?

Jack: Yeah, we can do it.

Jason: Okay. Lets look around here for some weapons.

Scene 9, Church

Luis: (Locked in room. Leaning against box. Blood spread across room. Tighten belt at edge of wound) Ugh. (Knock box over and look inside to find wooden leg and duck tape. Pull pant leg up a little and put wooden leg on part of leg that’s severed. Being taping wooden leg to real leg and use the whole thing of tape)

Scene 10, Village

(Night time)

(All in barn picking out weapons)

Jason: (Attach sickle to belt and pick up machete)

Julio: (Pull out ax)

Jack: (Pick up pitchfork)

Jose: (Pick up sledge and small hammer)

Enrico: (Picks up wood saw and screw driver)

Jack: I think I’m about ready. I’m gonna head out.

Jason: Okay, good luck.

Jack: I’ll contact you. (Run out of barn)

Jose: (Leave barn)

Jason: Enrico, you almost ready?

Enrico: (Sharpening screw driver) Just a second)

(About 30 seconds pass)

Enrico: (Go to Jason) Okay, I’m ready.

Maniac: (Saw through back of barn)

(Cops and Julio run out of barn)

Maniac: (Run through barn and chase them all the way to the tunnel while limping. Chase the 3 people all the way through the tunnel to the other side)

Jason: (Slam trap door shut and put a piece of wood in it to lock it shut)

Maniac: (Start sawing through trap door)

(Group runs outside wooden door)

Jason: (Shut door and group turns around)

(8 cult members stand in front of group)

Enrico: Oh shit.

Maniac: (Walk towards door and saw through it cutting off Enrico’s right arm)

Enrico: Ahhhh! Shit!

Jason: (Grab Enrico’s left side) Julio, help me!

Julio: (Grab Enrico’s right side)

(Julio and Jason run with Enrico past cult members)

Maniac: (Breaks through door and chases them)

Jason: Shit!

(All continue running)

Jason: Julio, grab his radio!

Julio: (Grab Enrico’s radio and put it in pocket)

Jason: Aim for that house!

(Group runs to house and shuts and locks door)

Julio: What are we gonna do, Jason?

Jason: I got an idea. (Bring Enrico to couch) Hold onto him. (Pull cushions off couch) Perfect. Okay, Enrico, we’re gonna hide you in here, okay? You’ve gotta keep quiet, okay?

Enrico: (Out of it. Nods yes weakly)

Jason: Okay. (Life Enrico and hide him inside couch. Put cushions back on)

Julio: Where should we hide?

Jason: (Look at kitchen) Hide in one of those cabinets.

Julio: (Run and hide in cabinets)

Jason: (Looking around for a place to hide)

Maniac: (Start sawing through door)

Jason: (Startled) Shit. (Run through kitchen and dinning room into bathroom and hide between toilet and cabinet. Notice dried urine one floor and get grossed out)

Maniac: (Break through door and turn off chainsaw. Walk around house. Go into master bedroom and flip mattress off bed)

Jason: (Put toilet paper over urine)

Maniac: (Pull open dresser and violently pull clothes out and throw them on the floor. Cut top part of dresser off)

Enrico: (Lie inside couch trying to stay conscious)

Maniac: (Walk into bathroom and saw inside cabinets. Walk past Jason and not notice him due to the darkness of the room. Saw shower curtain off. Walk into dinning room and saw table in half. Walk into kitchen and open first cabinet)

Julio: (Sits in cabinet quietly)

(Rat crawls near Julio)

Julio: (Keeps quiet)

Maniac: (Open second cabinet)

Julio: (Sitting quietly. Turn to right and notice snake hanging from pipes) Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! (Run out of cabinet as fast as you can)

Maniac: (Turn around, start chainsaw and run after him)

Julio: (Run into bathroom and shut door, then run out and shut door)

Maniac: (Sawing through door)

Julio: (Hide in chimney)

Maniac: (Walk into dinning room and look around)

Julio: (Climb up chimney and onto rooftop)

Maniac: (Walk into kitchen and saw through all cabinets. Go into sitting room and look at couch. Start to pull off cushions)

Jason: (Run towards him) You mother####er! (Push him)

Maniac: (Drop chainsaw. Grab Jason by the neck and toss him into kitchen)

Jason: (Head hits top of door seal and lie there for a little bit)

Maniac: (Pick up chainsaw and cut into cushions)

(White material and blood goes everywhere)

Jason: (Run to bathroom and into bedroom and encounter Maniac) Shit. Julio!

Julio: I’m on the roof! Climb up the chimney!

Jason: (Run into dinning room and shut door. Put machete into door crack so the door doesn’t open. Get in fireplace and climb up chimney and onto roof)

Julio: Are you okay?

Jason: (Breathing hard. Nod head no) Enrico’s dead.

Julio: ####. We should go before he gets out of the house.

Jason: Okay.

(Both stand up)

Maniac: (Saw through roof)

(Roof shakes and sinks a little)

(Both fall over)

Jason: Shit! Come on! (Julio and Jason run to side of house and jump off. Towards woodland to the left of the house)

Maniac: (Run out front door and look around. Turn off chainsaw and walk back inside. Walk back outside with Enrico’s body on shoulders. Walk to village. Go to fire pit and stick hook over fire pit into Enrico’s foot. Leave him hanging over fire)

(At church)

Jack: (Enter church tactically and walk to altar. Notice over turned crosses and The La Tiniebla symbol. Look in cabinets. Walk upstairs and try door handle)

Luis: (Weakly and very quietly) H…help.

Jack: (Walk back towards stairs)

(Ax is thrown into wall right in front of him)

Jack: (Startled. Fall back and look downstairs)

Cult Member: (Walk upstairs)

Jack: (Start to stab him with pitchfork)

Cult Member: (Grab pitchfork and push it into his face)

Jack: Ah! (Let go and fall back)

Cult Member: (Toss pitchfork on chandelier)

Jack: (Get up and go into fighting stance)

Cult Member: Bring it on, pussy.

Jack: (Try to kick him)

Cult Member: (Grab his foot and trip him) Is that the best you can do, tough guy?

Jack: (Trip cult member and stand up)

(Cult member starts to get up)

Jack: (Kick him in face and break his nose)

Cult Member: Argh! (Nose bleeds) You mother ####er! (Get up and slam him against wall and throw 5 punches to his face)

Jack: (Block his 6th punch and break his wrist)

Cult Member: Ahhh!

Jack: (Kick him on the floor. Pull him up by the shirt and toss him out onto chandelier)

Cult Member: (Grab onto chandelier and hang there) Oh god! Please, help me down. I promise I’ll help you. I swear.

Jack: (Pull ax out of wall and go downstairs)

Cult Member: Please, I’ll let go…and you catch me, yeah?

Jack: No. (Use ax to cut off him left leg at the knee)

Cult Member: Ahhhhh! (Screaming in pain)

Jack: (Cut off his right leg at the knee)

Cult Member: Ahhh! (Slowly let go and drop from chandelier) Ahh! (Weakly) ####.

Jack: (Lie ax on cult member’s neck)

Cult Member: (Weakly) No, wait, please.

Jack: (Put foot on back of ax)

Cult Member: (Weakly) No, no, no…

Jack: (Slowly push down on ax while cult member gags)

(Back at woodlands)

(Jason and Julio walk into tunnel in cliff side. Walk to bed with bloodstains and La Tiniebla symbol over it. Candles around bed are lit)

Jason: What the #### is this?

Julio: I don’t know.

Jason: Looks like it was used for sacrifices.

Julio: (Notice restraints on bed) Yeah.

(Flashback)

Cult Members: (Tie Isabella to bed naked) Sacrifice! (Continuously shout)

(Miguel and Maniac walk into room)

Cult Member: (Hand ax to Miguel)

Miguel: (Take ax and walk to Isabella)

Isabella: Help! Somebody help!

Miguel: (Put ax to her belly, pull it back and swing ax into her belly)

(Present Day)

Jason: Unless we wanna be sacrificed along with the others, I suggest we move on.

(Both walk away)

(Back at village)

Maniac: (Feel Enrico’s arm) Hmm. (Strip off his shirt and put him off hook. Bring him to large table inside shed. Walk outside shed door and ring bell)

Cult Members: (Walk to dinner shed)

Cult Member: Hahaha, it’s dinnertime!

(Cult members eat away at Enrico’s body)

(At torture shed)

Jose: (Walk to torture shed and walk inside)

(Many dead bodies hang from the wall and ceiling)

Jose: Holy shit. (Hold mouth and gag) ####. (Walk more into shed. Find metal trap door and open it. Walk down the wooden stairs into dark, underground area. Walk to locked cell door and look inside)

(Captive villagers are inside)

Lio: Oh please, you gotta help us. You gotta get us out of here, please.

Jose: Yes, I’m working on it. Give me a minute.

Lio: Please, hurry, he’s gonna kill us.

Jose: (Try to pick lock) Shh. (Lock picks wont work) Hang on. (Look around in underground room. Pick up hedge cutter and go to chain. Cut chain and open door)

Lio: Oh god, thank you.

Jose: What’s your name?

Lio: My name is Lio.

Jose: I’m Jose. Are there any other hostages?

Lio: There’s more down that way.

Jose: Okay. (Push him into cell and shut door)

Lio: Wait, what are you doing?

Jose: Stay there. I’ll come back for you. (Walk to other cell)

(Juan, and Samuel are all in cell)

Juan: Who are you?

Jose: It’s okay. I’m here to rescue you. (Cut chain off door)

Samuel: Oh, thank god.

Jose: Follow me. (Drop hedge cutter and pull out sledge. Walk to Lio’s cell and open it) Come on.

(All walk towards stairs)

(Steel door shuts)

Jose: NO! (Run to door and try to open it)

(Door locks)

Jose: Shit! Argh! Mother ####er! (Hit door with sledge 7 times)

Maniac: (Walk away from door)

Jose: (Sit on steps bummed out) Is there any other way out of this room?

Samuel: I don’t know. Sadly, I do not think so.

Jose: ####. (Pull out radio) Jason, you there? …Jason? (Radio turns to static) Son of a bitch. (Put radio away. Get off stairs and walk past villagers) Come on. We may as well search for a way out.

(Back at the church)

Jack: (Walk around back of church and find trap door. Open it and walk down wooden stairs into church basement)

(Basement is flooded with water a foot deep)

Jack: (Raise ax and tactically walk over to upside down cross)

(Up side down cross has Alejandro nailed to it up side down)

Alejandro: (Weakly) H…help me. Please. (Cough blood)

Jack: Good lord. Okay, I’m gonna try and get you down. (Look at his body)

(Alejandro has a nail in his head and 17 nails in his belly and chest. His whole body is bloody)

Jack: Oh my god. (Go close to him and examine hands)

(Nails go through hands and cross)

Jack: Okay, I’m gonna look around here for something to get the nails out. I’m not leaving you. I’m gonna search around in here.

Alejandro: Please…hurry.

Jack: Okay, I will. (Walk around basement looking for a hammer. Open a few cabinets) Damn, nothing. (Pull out knife and look at it) Hmm, this might work. (Walk over to Alejandro) Okay, I’m sorry, I couldn’t find anything to remove the nails, but I think my knife will work. I’m going to test it, okay? You with me?

Alejandro: Mm.

Jack: Okay. (Climb on counter and try to remove nails) What’s your name?

Alejandro: Al…Alejandro.

The rest of the script is in the 3rd post

Edited August 4, 2006 by Jezz Torrent

[Gerard]

Villiage People, eh?

Pretty creative, not too many chichés - I like it

[Jezz Torrent]

thanks gerard.

heres the rest of the script:

Jack: Alejandro? I’m Jack. Nice to meet you. (Try to put off nails) ####. It’s not working.

Alejandro: Please, don’t try. Kill me. Please! I need you to.

Jack: I’m sorry, but I can’t do that.

Alejandro: You… d…don’t under…stand. I’m suffering.

Jack: I can help you. Trust me.

(Footsteps in church)

Jack: (Look up) Shit. Someone’s coming. I have to get you off this thing.

Alejandro: No! Leave me!

Jack: Shh, quiet!

Maniac: (Open door to basement)

Jack: Shit! (Climb off counter and go into cabinet and shut door)

Maniac: (Walk into basement and go over to Samuel. Get close to his face and look him in eyes)

Alejandro: (Eye the cabinet on accident then look back at Maniac)

Maniac: (Look at cabinet. Start chainsaw and saw into cabinet)

Jack: (Quietly gasp and move down cabinet)

Maniac: (Keep sawing in cabinets)

Jack: (Climb out of cabinets without Maniac knowing)

Maniac: (Set chainsaw on top of cabinets and peek inside cabinets)

(Jack is gone) Grrr. (Stand back up)

(Chainsaw is gone)

Maniac: (Turn around)

Jack: (Start to cut Maniac)

Maniac: (Grab on chainsaw)

Jack: Ugh! Get the #### out of here!

Maniac: (Push Jack to Alejandro)

Jack: (Slip and cut up Alejandro)

(Alejandro screams in pain and slowly dies)

Jack: Shit!

Maniac: (Put Jack in a choke hold)

Jack: Ah! Son of a bitch! (Cut his shoulder)

Maniac: Grr! (Fall back)

Jack: (Turn around and raise chainsaw)

Maniac: (Kick him)

Jack: (Fall back and hit wall. Drop chainsaw on counter top and fall on floor. Start to get up and grab chainsaw)

Maniac: (Grab Jack’s hand and punch him in face then throw him on floor. Pick up chainsaw and start it. Turn around)

(Jack is gone)

Maniac: (Walk around wine racks and notice water movement. Start chainsaw)

Jack: (Push over wine rack)

Maniac: (Dodge it)

Jack: (Run up the stairs out of wine cellar and shut wooden door. Put shovel through handles and run)

Maniac: (Saw through shovel handle and run out of cellar and look around for Jack)

(Jack is no where to be found)

(Jason and Julio sneak into village and hide behind fence)

Jason: I dropped my gun over by that tower. And my last magazine over by that building. I need to go and get them.

Julio: Okay. The Cult members are all at dinner right now. They’re in that shed over there.

Jason: Perfect. Okay, stay put. (Run over to tower and look around for gun. Find gun in bushes and pick it up. Holster in then sneak over to sliding door and search for clip)

(Cult member begins walking out of dinning shed)

Julio: (Quietly) Pst! Jason! Jason!

(Jason continues to search)

Julio: (Toss rock near Jason)

Jason: (Looks at Julio)

(Julio points to dinner shed)

Jason: (Look at cult member walking toward you) Shit. (Jump and hide behind fire)

Cult Member: (Walk up near sliding door)

Jason: (Crawl around fire and notice clip under wheelbarrow by door) Shit.

Cult Member: (Examine footprints. Smell air) Ahh. Mendez! (Walk into dinner shed)

Jason: (Sneak back to door and pick up clip and load gun)

Julio: (Loud. Stand up) Jason! Turn around!

Jason: (Turn around)

(Entire cult stands in front of Jason)

Jason: Oh shit. (Aim gun) All right, stay back or I’ll shoot!

Cult Member: He’s only got 16 bullets. Kill him!

Jason: No, stay back! I’ll shoot anyone who tries to get over here!

Cult Member: He’ll only be able to kill 16 of us tops. After those 16 are dead, he’s defenseless. (Toss knife at him)

Jason: (Shoot knife)

Cult Member 2: (Throw beer bottle at him)

Jason: (Shoot beer bottle)

Cult Member: (Throw ax at him)

(Ax cuts Jason’s shoulder)

Jason: Ah! ####! (Fall to ground)

(Cult members run to Jason and beat him up and kick gun away from him)

Miguel: (Fire gun into air) Stop! Bastards! Get the #### out of here!

(Cult members run off)

(Miguel and Maniac walk to Jason)

Miguel: Take this fag away!

Maniac: (Pick Jason up and drag him to door)

Jason: Ugh. Please let me go. (Weakly)

Maniac: (Slam his head into door. Put him on back and start to walk to torture shed)

Miguel: (Notice Julio hiding. Draw gun and shoot 4 times)

(1 bullet hits Julio in chest. Julio survives)

Julio: Ahh! (Fall holding chest)

Miguel: Mendez, get him and meet me at the torture shed!

Maniac: (Drop Jason and start chainsaw. Run to Julio)

Julio: (Slowly get up and notice Maniac) Oh shit. (Slowly limp away)

Miguel: (Walk over to Jason)

Jason: (Look up at Miguel)

Miguel: (Kick Jason in face. Carry him to torture shed)

Maniac: (Chases Julio to a house north of village)

Julio: (Run inside house and shut and lock door. Walk backwards and fall into couch. Wait about 30 seconds) Where the #### is he? (Walk towards door and look out peephole)

Maniac: (Saw through peephole)

Julio: (Pieces of wood fly in eyes) Ahh! (Lean back and start to run away)

Maniac: (Saw into door seal)

(Nails fly out of door and one hits Julio)

Julio: Ahh! (Fall)

Maniac: (Walk in and turn of chainsaw. Walk to Julio and stab chainsaw into his back)

Julio: (Scream at top of lungs)

Scene 11, Torture Shed

(Jason hangs on hook with handcuffs)

Maniac: (Open door and walk in)

Jason: (Wake up and gasp)

(Maniac and Miguel walk in room)

Maniac: (Drag Julio’s dead body inside)

Jason: (Whisper) Julio. (Pause)

Maniac: (Drop body)

Jason: (Whisper) Oh ####. (Look down)

Miguel: What’s the matter? Not strong enough to have saved him? (Walk towards Jason)

Jason: (Cough blood at Miguel) Miguel, you mother ####er!

Miguel: I’d be careful if I were you, Jason. You’re in no position to be ####ing about. (To Maniac) Mendez, teach him some manners. (Step back)

Maniac: (Drop chainsaw and walk towards Jason. Punch him 5 times in belly)

Jason: Argh! (Cough out blood)

Maniac: (Put gloves on. Pick up hacksaw and cut off Jason’s jacket and shirt. Drop them on floor. Cut Jason’s belly)

Jason: (Screaming)

Miguel: Shut that faggot up!

Maniac: (Look at Miguel and drop hack saw. Beat up Jason. Grab tape from table and go behind Jason. Pull his head back and cover mouth with tape)

Jason: Mmmmmm! Mmm! Mmmmmmmmmm!

Maniac: (Walk in front of Jason and chuck tape at his face)

Jason: Mmmm!

Maniac: (Pick up chainsaw and start it)

(Noises downstairs)

(Chainsaw stops)

Miguel: What the #### was that? (Walk to Maniac) Did you leave someone downstairs?

(Flashback)

(Steel door shuts)

Jose: NO! (Run to door and try to open it)

(Door locks)

Jose: Shit! Argh! Mother ####er! (Hit door with sledge 7 times)

(Present Time)

Maniac: (Nod. Walk out of shot)

Jose: (Hammering through stone roof)

(Roof breaks open)

Jose: Hew. Thank Christ! (Drop hammer) Okay. Lets get you guys out of here. Lio, climb on my back. (Kneel down)

(Lio climbs on back and Jose lifts him up to hole in roof)

Jose: Ok, Samuel, you’re next. (Kneel down and lift him up and he stands on your back) Juan, you ready?

Juan: God bless you, sir.

Jose: Yes, of course. (Kneel down)

(Juan gets on Jose’s back)

Jose: (Lift him up) Okay. (Jump up) Shit! Hey, Juan. I can’t reach it!

Juan: (Look in hole) I’m sorry. I can’t get you out.

Jose: What the #### are you talking about? Get me out of here!

Juan: I’m sorry sir. Goodbye. (Run away)

Jose: Juan! Juan! Damn it you chicken shit, bastard! ####. (Go into cell room and bring out bed. Stand on bed and start to jump to hole)

Maniac: (Burst through trap door with chainsaw and rush down the stairs. Begin to run to Jose)

Jose: Shit! (Jump up and catch side of hole. Start to climb up)

Maniac: (Running to him with chainsaw)

Jose: (Climb out of hole and stand up)

Maniac: (Grab his foot)

Jose: Ahhh! (Fall over)

Maniac: (Pull his leg into hole and saw it off)

Jose: Ahhhhhh! Urrrrrggghh! Shit!

Maniac: (Saw above hole and cut his body in half. Run upstairs and out of torture shed to catch up to villagers)

Miguel: Mendez, where are you going? (Walk near Jason)

Jason: (Jump up and grab Miguel with legs. Lick tape off of mouth) You mother ####er! I’ll kill you for all the things you’ve done!

Miguel: Argh! Mendez!

Jason: Mendez has his hands full right now, asshole! (Pull self off of hook)

(Miguel and Jason fall on floor and get up)

Jason: (Hit Miguel in face with handcuffs)

Miguel: Ahh! (Fall to the side. Pull out knife and swing it at Jason)

Jason: (Jump back and dodge it)

Miguel: (Swing knife again)

Jason: (Dodge it and kick it out of his hands. Kick him in face)

Miguel: (Fall back on floor)

Jason: (Turn around and look at table saw. Plug it in and turn it on. Cut handcuff chain with table saw. Pick up machete off table and turn around)

(Miguel is gone)

Jason: (Run to torture shed door and look outside)

Miguel: (Running through woods away from torture shed) Mendez! Mendez!

Jason: Shit. (Shut door and tie chain around handles. Look around torture shed for medical supplies. Find medical kit on table and wrap bandage around wound. Pull off Julio’s shirt and put it on. Turn around and notice gun on floor) Oh, thank god. (Pick it up) Please be loaded, please be loaded. (Pull out magazine)

(Gun is fully loaded)

Jason: (Relieved. Put magazine back in gun and tactically leave torture shed)

Scene 12, Barn Shed

Jack: (Walk in shed and look around. Pick up ax off floor and move farther into shed. Go to back of shed and find Richard and Sarah in a stable cell)

Sarah: Oh god! Please don’t hurt us!

Richard: Please, stay away!

Jack: No, no! Shhh!

Sarah: Oh my god!

Jack: Shut the #### up! I’m here to save you. I’m an American police officer. My name is Jack Thompson. I was sent here along with another police officer and two Spanish officers. You’re safe now. We’re gonna get you out of here!

Richard: Oh, thank god. You’re here to rescue us?

Jack: I’m here to rescue you, and any other victim of La Tiniebla that’s still alive. I don’t think any villagers were left alive, but where is the rest of your class?

Sarah: (Starts to cry) They’re all dead.

Jack: All of them?

Sarah: They got murdered. That ####ing guy with a ####ing chainsaw massacred them all!

Jack: Shit. I gotta get you out of her. Then, we’re gonna find the other cop, Jason, and get the #### outta here.

Richard: What about the other Spanish cops you mentioned?

Jack: I have no idea whether or not they’re still alive. They’re gonna have to fend for themselves. We can’t risk going back out there to find them. It’s too dangerous.

Richard: Okay.

Jack: All right, I’m gonna get you out of here. Stand back.

(Sarah and Richard step back)

Jack: (Swing ax at lock)

(Lock breaks off)

Sarah: (Laugh in relief) Yes! Oh thank god!

Jack: (Open door and walk in stable cell) Okay. Before we leave, I want to know if either of you know anything about all that’s happening.

Richard: I don’t know anything. We just wondered away from our class and the next thing we know, we’re being hunted down by a maniac with a chainsaw and all our classmates were dead.

Jack: Okay. Lets get out of here. We’re gonna go find Jason, and then we’ll find a way out of the village. Okay?

Richard: Okay.

(All 3 walk out of barn)

Jack: (Grab torch)

Scene 13, Woodland

(Lio, Juan and Samuel run through woodlands trying to escape the village)

Juan: (Notice leaves falling from tree ahead)

(Group keeps running)

Maniac: (Drops from tree and saws Lio in half)

Juan: Shit!

(Juan and Samuel run opposite ways)

Maniac: (Chase after Juan)

Juan: (Run all the way to cliff and stop)

Maniac: (Catch up to him)

Juan: No, please!

Maniac: (Push him over cliff)

Juan: Ahh! (Grab onto edge and hold on) Shit! Oh god, I’m begging you. Please pull me up. Please.

Maniac: (Step on Juan’s fingers)

Juan: (Quietly) Ahh! Oww! Ahh!

Maniac: (Saw his hand off)

Juan: Ahh! (Let go of edge and fall screaming)

Samuel: (Jump down into river and start to climb up cliff. Grab plant root and pull self up)

Cult Member 1: (Shoot arrow into Samuel’s back)

Samuel: Agh!

Cult Member 1: Yeah, hahaha!

Cult Member 2: (Laughing. Hand him another arrow)

Cult Member 1: Shoot arrow into Samuel’s back)

Samuel: Urgh! (Gagging. Fall off cliff and into river on back)

(Arrows hit ground and go through Samuel’s Belly and chest)

Samuel: (Gag. Cough up blood)

(Cult members jump down from tree)

Cult Member 1: (Shoot arrow into Samuel’s mouth)

(Samuel dies and blood comes out of his mouth)

(Cult members do high five)

Scene 14, Church

Luis: (Lies on floor. Sit up and accidentally pull open a wooden box and find papers. Look at them all)

(Papers are documents regarding Maniac’s schizophrenia condition)

Luis: (Notice the Maniac’s last name is Mendez) His last name is Mendez? (Pull out ID card)

(Name on ID card is Luis Mendez)

Luis: (Gasps)

(Flashback)

Miguel: (Snaps fingers) Mendez!

Maniac: (Walks up front to Jorge)

(Mask disappears to show that Luis is Maniac Mendez)

(Flashback)

Jason: (Run to entry way)

Maniac: (Block door and try to cut Jason)

Jason: (Duck and run up the stairs)

Maniac: (Cut Jason’s arm)

(Flashback)

(Miguel and Luis stand on church balcony watching over the village)

(Present Day)

Luis: Oh my ####ing god! But…

(Flashback)

Luis: (Peaking out window)

Maniac: (Start chainsaw)

Luis: (Turn around and gasp)

Maniac: (Cut off his leg at his shin)

Luis: Ahhh!

(Present Day)

Luis: That didn’t even happen?

Maniac: (Walk in room and go to shelves on wall. Back facing Luis)

Luis: (Stand up slowly and limp over behind Maniac)

(Maniac turns around)

Luis: (Pull off Maniac’s mask)

(Maniac is Luis)

Luis: (Gasp loud)

Maniac: (Stare at him)

Luis: (Look down at Maniac’s leg and pull up pant leg)

(Maniac has fake leg)

(Flashback)

(Torture Shed)

(Maniac is handcuffed and hanging from hook)

Miguel: Because of you, I lost several men today. You can’t even kill a goddamn cop! One ####ing cop! I had a lot of faith in you, Mendez, and you let me down! For that, you will be punished! (Pick up shotgun and shoot off part of his leg)

Maniac: Ahhhhhh!

Miguel: Stop crying like a ####ing baby, and be a man damn it! (Punch him. Pick up fake leg off table and show it to him) Now, you will use this fake leg as a replacement, and go ####ing get that cop! (Toss leg on floor and walk to cult members) Get him down. (Leave shed)

(Cult members walk to Maniac)

(Present Day)

Luis: (Looking down) That’s how I lost my leg? (Cry quietly)

Maniac: (Disappear)

Luis: (Gasp and look around. Notice that you are wearing Maniac’s clothes. In one hand is the mask and the other hand is the chainsaw. Mouth wide open)

Jason: (Walking up to church. Walk inside church tactically with gun. Walk upstairs and look into room) Luis? You okay?

Luis: (Look at him)

Jason: Why are you carrying that guy’s chainsaw? And wearing his clothes?

Luis: (Pause) Because…I am Maniac Mendez.

Jason: (Start to aim gun)

Luis: (Quickly pull out gun and shoot Jason)

Jason: (Fall over railing and onto seats in lower church level)

(Jason dies)

(Camera slowly zooms out and into a bird’s-eye view over village)

(Ending Credits)

THE END

what do you think?

[Oskar]

Uhh the maniac had his shoulder cut off right? Then how could he start the Chainsaw?

[Jezz Torrent]

no, he had the bottum of his leg cut off

btw, scythe, did you read the whole script?

if so:

what suggestions do you have?

what was your favorite part?

what was your least favorite?

overall, how did you like the script?

[Oskar]

Are you sure?

Jack: Ah! Son of a bitch! (Cut his shoulder)

I suggest you give more actions like in the beginning.

( Villagers are walking along the village peacefully )

( Robber get's chased thrpugh the village by a cop )

( Jorge walks wheelbarrow to barn whiel puffing and panting from it's weight. )

( Juan stacks the hay while moanign that she always has to do the stacking )

( All villagers talk and gossip etc etc.. )

( Camera swerves to the church and then zoom inside the door which is then taken away by another camera inside the church )

(Juan stacks hay)

(Isabella stirring food over fire pit sipping from time to time.)

(At church)

(Lio, Rosalie and Julio kneel and pray)

Samuel: (Runs to Isabella with a worried face) ( dramatically )Mama, over the hill! Savages! There’s a whole group of them coming this way!

(All villagers in area get up and run to the top of the hill and then there eyes widen and they drop there jaws. )

(A large group of about 500 tired and angry people walk towards the village with a fierce man on a horse in front with a brainless maniac with a bloodied chainsaw.)

Favourite part?

The Cabinet. Maniac is so dumb there. Jack should've bled to death and shoudl have teh maniac too though.

Least Favourite?

The beginning it seemed boring and a good grab in always works.

Overall?

7/10

Edit: Erased double line.

Edit 2: Oh sorry I see at the end that Luis and stuff. Sorry, I didn't read that part slowly.

Edited August 10, 2006 by Scythe

[Jezz Torrent]

Are you sure?

he gets it cut a lil, but it doesnt get cut all the way off

and thank you for the suggestion. i DO like it :]

also, the cabinet, do you mean the part in the basement of the church or what?

Edited August 10, 2006 by Jezz Torrent

[Oskar]

Yeah, I can transfer the whole script so it has more actions but I can't be bothered.

Also how can the maniac grab the chainsw when it's on? It will cut is palm off, unless it failed out.

[Jezz Torrent]

Yeah, I can transfer the whole script so it has more actions but I can't be bothered.

Also how can the maniac grab the chainsw when it's on? It will cut is palm off, unless it failed out.

he grabbed the handle

also

you did mean the part in the church basement as your favorite right?

how would they have bled to death in that scene?

[Oskar]

No, it's just that they were cut and they coudl be severely wounded so they bled to death.

Yes it is the basement of teh church, also can you say which Angelina Jolie sig is better?

Edit: OMG Scene 13 is my favbourite now it's just nice.

Edited August 10, 2006 by Scythe

[Jezz Torrent]

which part is scene 13?

and what sigs?

[Oskar]

In teh Which Sig? topic.

Scene 13, Woodland

(Lio, Juan and Samuel run through woodlands trying to escape the village)

Juan: (Notice leaves falling from tree ahead)

(Group keeps running)

Maniac: (Drops from tree and saws Lio in half)

Juan: Shit!

(Juan and Samuel run opposite ways)

Maniac: (Chase after Juan)

Juan: (Run all the way to cliff and stop)

Maniac: (Catch up to him)

Juan: No, please!

Maniac: (Push him over cliff)

Juan: Ahh! (Grab onto edge and hold on) Shit! Oh god, I’m begging you. Please pull me up. Please.

Maniac: (Step on Juan’s fingers)

Juan: (Quietly) Ahh! Oww! Ahh!

Maniac: (Saw his hand off)

Juan: Ahh! (Let go of edge and fall screaming)

Samuel: (Jump down into river and start to climb up cliff. Grab plant root and pull self up)

Cult Member 1: (Shoot arrow into Samuel’s back)

Samuel: Agh!

Cult Member 1: Yeah, hahaha!

Cult Member 2: (Laughing. Hand him another arrow)

Cult Member 1: Shoot arrow into Samuel’s back)

Samuel: Urgh! (Gagging. Fall off cliff and into river on back)

(Arrows hit ground and go through Samuel’s Belly and chest)

Samuel: (Gag. Cough up blood)

(Cult members jump down from tree)

Cult Member 1: (Shoot arrow into Samuel’s mouth)

(Samuel dies and blood comes out of his mouth)

(Cult members do high five)

[Jezz Torrent]

ahh yes, scene 13 was awesome

can i get a few others to read my script and lemme kno what they think?

[Spaz The Great]

No, it's just that they were cut and they coudl be severely wounded so they bled to death.

Yes it is the basement of teh church, also can you say which Angelina Jolie sig is better?

Edit: OMG Scene 13 is my favbourite now it's just nice.

STFU about sigs in his topic.... Jesus Christ......

I didn't read through the whole thing. If I'm going to read a story, I want it in story form. Make the movie and I'll go watch it....

[Jezz Torrent]

spaz, what parts did you read?