mvi Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 Part 1 The limo came up over the horizon, with dawn following in the distance. They'd been driving along the highway all night to try and keep hidden for as long as possible. The limo sped up having rounded a curve, so far so good. The limo rounded another curve, to be confronted in the distance by two far off cars barring the road. The limo slowed to a halt in front of the cars. Waiting in front of the cars was a man in a white linen suit, smoking a cigar. "Kill 'em boys" he said to the men waiting in the two black admirals. Seven men got out the cars, each armed with an m4. They each aimed their gun at the limo, and pulled the trigger, unloading round after round into the limo. The resounding explosions did not stop them firing even after there was nothing left but a burnt out carcass of a wreck. The man in white put his left hand up, and near instantly the firing stopped. The man dropped the cigar to the floor, crushing it underfoot, "You shouldn't have come back up north Tommy, you shouldn't have come back up north". The man got into the front passenger seat of one of the cars followed by the other seven. By the time anyone would discover the wreck, the man in white and his men would be long gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
888ball Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 yeah great, much better than the other one posted earlier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 2, 2005 Author Share Posted June 2, 2005 Though it wan't by me. This story has a few twists and turns in for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris82 Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 I love it. It is a great story, and I can't wait to hear the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydro Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 Hey, Guys check my next 2 chapters out in my topic hopefully i can restart it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 3, 2005 Author Share Posted June 3, 2005 Then post in your topic not mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon Posted June 4, 2005 Share Posted June 4, 2005 Good MVI exellent work I liked the story alot esspecialy when all the rounds went off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 4, 2005 Author Share Posted June 4, 2005 Meanwhile, the dark and dirt covered train station's silence was broken as a graffiti covered silver train slid into the station with high screecches as the brakes scratched the rails desperate to stop. The train shuddered to a stop with doors grinding open. A voice greeted visitors over a old tannoy system, 'Welcome to Liberty City Station, this train terminates here, all change.' A dark haired man exited the foremost carriage followed closely by his bodyguard. In the distance there was the sounds of the almost ritual screams, in a capital of crime. The dark haired man pulled out his cell phone and dialled a number. The only words he got were 'We've lost contact with them, they're all dead'. He put away his cell phone, suddenly anxious to get out of the large expanse, into somewhere more hidden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon Posted June 5, 2005 Share Posted June 5, 2005 Hip Hip Horay for the Magnificent MVI I love your storys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 5, 2005 Author Share Posted June 5, 2005 "Jesus Paul we're screwed, we've got to get out of here, the mafia will be down here anyday to clean up and then we're -" Paul cut him off, "Listen, Ken why don't we just get a plane out of here?". "Paul you idiot, they'll be watching the airports and they'll be watching the highways, oh we're doomed..." "I've got it!" exclamed Paul, he led Ken down the side stairs to the bottom floor of the mansion "Have a butchers at these", Paul indicated a room that could supply a small army with armour, weapons and ammunition. "You can't be serious, fighting would only get our asses killed quicker." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
888ball Posted June 5, 2005 Share Posted June 5, 2005 sorry for off topic but, what relation do neon and mvi have?? they both have pretty much the same sigs and neon practically loves mvi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 5, 2005 Author Share Posted June 5, 2005 If you were part of sd 4 you'd know that he wanted a matrix sig and av like mine. I see nothing wrong with appreciation, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
888ball Posted June 5, 2005 Share Posted June 5, 2005 lol ok maybe your just his idle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mvi Posted June 5, 2005 Author Share Posted June 5, 2005 I can live with that, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Jones Posted June 6, 2005 Share Posted June 6, 2005 Nice story mvi . I look forward to the reading the next part . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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