Samil

Alright, next episode is here, sorry for double post.In this episode, you'll find out the team's new friend and ride. EP. 3 - The Hexer The next morning, Jet woke up in one of Ace's rooms, and went in the kitchen, where he saw him, Tyrobali and Flazz eating. *Jet: God, breakfast without me? *Flazz: It's 1 PM. *Jet: What... *Ace: Hey mate, here's a bowl of cereal. *Jet: Nesquik? What am I a fuckin' kid? *Ace: You prefer to eat this, or you can go to a KFC risking to get yourself arrested. *Jet: Right. *eats* And, now I lost my ride too. *Ace: Sorry for it. *Jet: You better be, I found it and took it fair and square. *Ace: Yeah, well, you know what? I'm gonna repair it.Come on let's go! *Jet: Didn't even finish my cereals! *Ace: Move! *Jet: Asshole! They got up, and went to the same place they dueled a day ago.There, they found the rests of Jet's bike, and surprisingly, no police.They went to the bike and inspected it. *Jet: It's destroyed... *Ace: Hey there's a pickup truck.Let's place the bike on the back and get to a service. *Tyrobali: Okay, come on Flazz! Ain't gonna be a trouble. *Flazz: Hope so... They picked the bike and placed it on the back of the pickup truck, then went to the closest service.As the first couldn't help them, they went to another, and then others.After an hour of searching... *Mechanic: Sorry but this bike is, pretty much destroyed.We can't help ya, sorry guys. *Jet: Fuck, these guys can't help us either! *Flazz: Yeah it's like the 47th service... *Jet: Shut up... *Ace: Hmm... I know someone that can help us.He's an old High School friend of mine.Didn't see him for three years.He's a mechanical genius, he can help us.He's name is Sam Kowalski. *Tyrobali: Then let's go, I think I sense other Vectronians heading towards us. *Jet: Let's move it! *Ace: He's living in Milwaukee, Wisconsin.Hope we got enough gas... They got in the truck, and went north to Wisconsin.They checked the map, and after an hour, when they were about to get in Milwaukee, the truck's front left wheel popped.Frankly, Ace's friend was living close so they decided to go on foot, carrying the bike with them.After some other minutes of walking, they reached Ace's friend's warehouse.They went in, and Ace shouted to see if anyone is inside. *Ace: Hey! Anyone here? *Jet: Yo! We need someone to repair our bike. *???: I recognize that voice... *Ace: Of course you do you fuckin' moron! *???: I recognize that too! Haha, Ace! *Ace: Hey Sam, what's up? *Sam: Oh nothing, just in my busy thing operating stuff, repairing things, chemical researches and other stuff you know what I mean... *Ace: Errr... no, I don't.So, Sam, we need you to fix a bike. *Sam: I guess this is the bike? *Jet: Yeah, can you do something about it or not? *Sam: God, calm down! Of course I can! But, it'll take around two days. *Ace: We'll wait.By the way, these two are Tyrobali and Flazz, they're from a planet, err... Vectron right? *Tyrobali: Yeah, nice to meet ya Sam. *Sam: Wha-What the... Aliens? Hahaha! *Flazz: What's so funny asshole?! You don't believe us? *Sam: Haha! Of course, not! What am I a fuckin' moron? *Jet: I guess that's a trap question. *Sam: Ahem, so... I better get to work.Get yourself a drink or something, I think you'll stay here for some days. *Ace: I prefer the hotel... Sam got ready and started fixing Jet's bike.As hours passed, he was closer with every minute to repair it completely.In the mean time, Ace and Jet were chatting over the other side of the warehouse. *Jet: Man, this guy better fix it.Hope ya know what you're doin'! *Ace: I know, I know... either way he better fix it. The other day, as everyone was sleeping, they were suddenly awaken by Sam, who shouted loud. *Sam: Guys! It's done! *Jet: Ah fuck! Ten more minutes! *Ace: Wha... Sam, what the hell? *Sam: I fixed it, I fixed the bike.Hope ya like it. *Jet: Gaah... No school today... Wait, what? *Sam: The bike is ready! *Jet: Fuck yeah! Jet rushed to see his bike, being amazed by how Sam fixed it. *Jet: Whoa, it's awesome! *Ace: Yeah... Still wondering how was it so hard to 'get' another one. *Jet: Shut up! I should name it... how? *Sam: What do you say of... Frankenstein? *Jet: Way too science fiction. *Tyrobali: Burning flame? *Jet: A flame always burns you moron. *Ace: I know, what do you say of... 'The thing a sucker wanted so much too repair, and didn't do much anything, 'cause it's still a thing and it sucks'. *Jet: You idiot! *Flazz: I know! Something I saw through your memories. *Jet: Tell me. *Flazz: Hexer.It's Johnny's bike right? *Jet: Yeah...he nicknamed his bike Hexer, and it got blown up in the incident... yeah, it's a perfect name! Hexer it is! *Tyrobali: Good news! Sadly I got bad news too... *Ace: Don't even think about telling me... *Tyrobali: I got no choice... Suddenly, half of the warehouse was blown up in a huge explosion.Out of the smoke caused by the explosion, came some Vectronians.Ace and Jet took their weapons and slayed some of them, but they just kept coming.Then, Ace used the combined power of Tyrobali with his gun, destroying over half of the aliens.The other half was destroyed by Jet, using the same technique as Ace.Unfortunately, the warehouse was completely destroyed, and so was something for Ace... *Sam: No! No! My home! My lab! My inventions! *Ace: Oh, no! My gun! *Sam: What did I do to deserve this?! *Ace: What did I do to deserve my gun wrecked?! *Jet: Someone shut up and let the other one cry! *Sam: I lost everything! My lab! My projects! My life! ... To be continued NEW CHARACTER: Sam Kowalski: THEME: 'Weird' Al Yankovic - White and Nerdy <--- song is property of its owner, no copyright infringements[Also, credit to Chamillionaire for the original song] Hope you enjoyed it! Notify of mistakes, also give suggestions NEXT EPISODE: 29/06/2010

Do you have the HUD enabled? I think you can find this in the Options, in Display.There's an option called 'Enable HUD'.I think tho, never removed my HUD. Hope I helped somehow.

Next episode is tomorrow.Also, I did check and honestly, don't know how to improve it.But will keep looking on and trying to figure it out.

Yeah, forgot to mention: Except those who actually know to release the Caps button [those you listed above and others].Yet this means, abeer is the only failure on the forum.

Just give me some suggestions on how to improve it.

Well as in the description, I will post all episodes of Season I.Episode 1 was already released, find it here EDIT: Thank you for combining the two topics. Anyway, this is Episode 2, once again hope you guys will enjoy it.Episode 3 will be here on Friday. In this episode, you'll find out a new character's past, present and future. EP. 2 - The Biker Lake Michigan, 10:52 AM.A man in a leather jacket, Jet 'Fire' Garcia, is speeding towards the harbor on a boat, being chased by police.As he arrives on land, he runs away, and finds a motorcycle.He gets on it, and drives away from the location.He stops one kilometer away, in an abandoned warehouse in downtown Chicago.He locks the doors, blocks the windows, and as the warehouse was holding old furniture, he found a sofa, and went to sleep, tired after the incident. Meanwhile, Ace was flying over the city, through clouds to avoid being noticed. *Ace: Whoa! This is crazy! And awesome! *Tyrobali: Yeah, let's keep flying for another hour and then land, okay? *Ace: Okay, okay. One hour later, in the abandoned warehouse, Jet just woke up.As he got up, he heard a noise coming from some boxes.He took his shotgun, and slowly advanced towards the boxes.Then, suddenly, another liquid flew out of a box, scaring Jet, who fired his shotgun, destroying the box.The liquid then pasted on his chest, but, just as Tyrobali, it felt a shock, and backed off.Jet then aimed at the alien. *Jet: What the fuck are ya?! *???: Wait! Don't! Don't shoot me! *Jet: Just give me a damn reason why not to do it! *???: Listen, I'm an alien... *Jet: So far that's a reason to shoot you! *Flazz: Listen to me you son of a bitch! First, my name is Flazz.If I could have combine with ya you'd be dead! Listen! You got power in you! You stopped me from taking you over! You literally tamed me, so now, I will follow and protect you everywhere.I need to combine with you. *Jet: You think I'm just some stupid motherfucker?! You nearly killed me! *Flazz: You must help me! I don't have much to live! I need someone to combine with! *Jet: I got a life! It's fucked up but it's mine! Lemme have it! *Flazz: Let me combine with you, please! You can get extreme powers! *Jet: Extreme power... alright then! Flazz pasted again on Jet's chest, and successfully combined with him.He analyzed his memories, and took the form of a spirit of fire, with burning flames over its head. *Jet: That was weird... *Flazz: You had one tough past... and I took shape of your personality, which is pretty angry. *Jet: Well I told ya my life's fucked... Lemme tell ya my story. *Flazz: Okay. *Jet: So, I was born in Buffalo, New York.My mom was a heavy drinker, and everyday I've seen her with a bottle in her hand, or with a syringe of heroin.She was addicted to drugs.She was killed when trying to buy some, in some assault by another dealer.My dad, well I don't know anything about him.He left when my mom was pregnant.Tried to find him, after my mom got killed, and as soon as I got an address, I visited it, and by surprise, I saw my father.Too bad he was dead, he hung himself.That's the only day I ever saw my father... Anyway, from the age of seventeen, I was recruited in The New Age MC, by a guy, Johnny Kassidy, who became my best friend.Now at the age of 35, when we tried to free some of our guys from a police convoy, but damn... it turned out nasty... *Flazz: I feel the pain in your voice... *Jet: It all happened on a road by Lake Erie.We were eight... When one of our guys shot the cop in the lead car, the others came out, and hell was broken loose.Traffic was stopped, and bullets flew everywhere.Five of our guys were killed, and Johnny with one more guy was taken by the cops.Since the scene was next to Lake Erie, I tried to escape and jumped in the lake.I swam until I reached a fishing boat.I threw the guy off, and took the boat.Then, I sailed until I reached Michigan.I still remember it well, how I ran from the police for days, from Detroit to Holland, took another boat, and yet again chased by police.Shit thing is that, the boat I found was a cop one.Now I'm here, wanted dead or alive. *Flazz: Yeah... pretty sad story... *Jet: What about you? *Flazz: Nothing special... I lived on our planet, until I was recruited.I saw the army kill on every planet we went on, so I had enough.I thought I took the wrong decision coming here on Earth, but I didn't, since I met you. *Jet: So... hey whats with you? *Flazz: I think it's a Vectronian.I sense it. *Jet: Then we better find him, right? *Flazz: I sense something coming from east of our position.Let's get on the bike! While flying, Tyrobali sensed an alien presence west of their position. *Tyrobali: Huh... *Ace: What's wrong Toothpaste? *Tyrobali: Tyrobali! Ty-ro-ba-li! Argh... anyway, I sensed an alien presence, it's just like a Vectronian.We better hurry! *Ace: Which way? *Tyrobali: Turn around! Hurry! Ace turned around, and flew west.Meanwhile, while the streets were clear of police, Jet and Flazz were speeding towards the east side.After some minutes, Ace landed on the main street, and Jet arrived on his bike on the same street. *Ace: I guess you're the one we were looking for? *Jet: Maybe, and you're the one we were looking for. *Tyrobali: You! Are you here to destroy me? *Flazz: What? I'm a rebel! *Tyrobali: So, you're not here to destroy me? *Flazz: I'm here to protect the humans! *Tyrobali: Finally found someone like me! *Jet: Stay back Flazz, I don't trust them. *aims* *Ace: You got that right! *aims* *Tyrobali: Wait! *Flazz: I trust them! *Jet: I don't... you're just some motherfuckin' long coat emo asshole! *Ace: Not a nice thing to say... *shoots motorcycle* Jet's motorcycle blew up as Ace's bullet hit the gas tank. *Jet: Motherfucker! My bike! *Ace: I have to protect Earth, but can't do it alone you know? What do you say, will you join me? *Jet: Hell no! I'll save it on my own! And after what ya done to my bike, get the fuck out before I send your head off the planet! *Ace: Then, let's make a deal.We'll have a duel, if I win, you join us, and I'm boss.You win, I'll get you a new bike. *Jet: Heh... deal! *Ace: Okay, clean duel. *Flazz: Oh boy... The two got in the middle of the deserted street, back at back, and each made ten steps away.As they were about to shoot each other, an explosion was provoked at a building just next to them. *Ace: Damn! What the? *Tyrobali: It's them! They're here! *Flazz: Oh man! Jet, time to learn your powers! *Jet: What? Well, a'ight! Let's own 'em! *Ace: We better do it too, right T.B.? *Tyrobali: Haha, yeah! They combined their guns with their companions, and fired at the aliens.The fight lasted only a minute, until each alien was down, and police sirens could be heard from distance. *Ace: Now let's continue our duel, shall we? *Jet: Yeah. They got again in position, and each took a shot.Jet missed, while Ace hit Jet in the shoulder, scratching his arm. *Ace: I win, now let's get outta here! *Jet: Shit... *Ace: Cops are coming, let's go fast! *Jet: Hold on, see the barrels? *Ace: Yeah... Oh, I understand... *Jet: Heheh... Each shot a barrel, provoking an explosion, and soon a chain reaction.After the smoke disappeared and the police arrived, no one was to be seen, only the bodies of the aliens.Two hundred meters away, on top of a building, the crew was watching the scene. *Ace: So you now work for me. *Jet: Don't expect me to be loyal.I just keep my promises. *Tyrobali: I'm Tyrobali by the way. *Flazz: Flazz.Pleasure to meet you, mate. *Tyrobali: Ha, indeed! Pleasure's all mine. *Ace: Come on, let's go home.I think I saw a police helicopter arriving. ... To be continued NEW CHARACTER: Jet 'Fire' Garcia: THEME: Breaking Benjamin - Blow Me Away <-- song is property of its owner, no copyright infringement. Once again, notify me of mistakes and also tell some suggestions. Thanks and hope you enjoyed it! ~Samil

Sure, Ivan.I'm curious to know what I wrote wrong. And thanks for the reply!

Alvas, message from my bud, Vlad: 'You're pretty smart, thanks for the suggestion.' Well there you have it, Vlad thanks you, so do I! Thanks for the suggestion, Alvas!

Thanks, and I know, there are some parts that need to be improved.The humor in the first episodes is not something 100% good, but I know it will improve.

T, during mission 'The Meat Business'. Q: In 'Done Peyote', what happens if the player does not pull over so Paul can vomit?

Doubt he is, answer is F. T/F: The Primo resembles a Toyota Camry.

I really want to know what those things are.They're in the very top left corner of the map, check it out.They shine at night.I was wondering what are those things, and why are they placed there.Anyway... Back to the topic, the answer is: F: Ammu-Nation only has a commercial. T/F: The Gimp suit allows you to have intimate relations with any of your girlfriends.

The barrier around San Andreas is unlimited, means you can go straight east towards Liberty City, but never arrive there.Just go, go, go, get bored and kill yourself.Tho, there is a topic around the forum about a secret island, not south-east of LS, but south of Bayside Marina.Don't remember well where the topic was, but it should be around here. You'll read more about this island in the topic. You mean that island that's on that map in Lil Probe Inn and Toreno's place, but not on the actual game map? Exactly! The one the whole forum discussed about it.

Well right now the myth I am curious to solve, or at least try to, is the one with the so called horses in Las Barrancas.The myth says that a whole cavalry, the 66th Cavalry, led by Colonel Henry Bolt, was heading towards Las Barrancas, when the whole cavalry fell down a huge hole. It is said that you can heard the sound of 100 horses riding at night around Las Barrancas.Honestly, I dared trying, and I didn't find much.Tho, after every sandstorm that hit the town, I could hear something, and it was like horses trotting. I was standing at the Hopi Ruins, I stopped the time at midnight, traffic was stopped, it was only me, and the air.I still wonder if everything is true.Usually when a sandstorm occurs in the desert, I don't hear any trot.Yet unknown if this myth is true or false, but I'm really curious to know.

Well, this is my new series of a Sci-Fi... 'manga/anime' [] This is a project I was working at with my good old bud, Vlad.He had this idea when on the toilet, and it actually sounded cool.So I decided to help him out with it, so we wrote down some ideas, and got started.Currently, we have 12 episodes of Season I [number of episodes by now] but sure things will go smoooth. As soon as we started, we became more and more serious, so we also created some cosplays of the main characters, protagonists or antagonists, secondary characters, and so. I will only post the cosplays at the end of each episode, and it'll be the new character from the episode [eg. in first it's Acelius Connor] so you might scroll down to see it, or you might start reading. EDIT: I will also add down under their 'theme song' [each song mentioned belongs to their owner, producer or composer <--disclaimer in case of anything] EDIT2: This episode as well as many other that will come, is made by me and my friend, Vlad.Feel free to copy the episodes on any other side, but at least give us credit.Don't say it's yours, please. Credits: -Me, Samil Musledin - Writer -Vlad Tifer - Producer, ideas -Lorena Cornea - For the outstanding artworks -Motörhead - Inspired the name, also would like to have the 'Ace of Spades' song as intro -Gaia Online's TekTek - For making the cosplays of the characters -UGO Entertainment's Hero Machine 2.5 - Also making some cosplays, more detailed -TheGTAPlace - People that support me, such as: Gerard[helping me a lot], Ivan[encouragement], little homer[long time 'fan'] and others [they know themselves] !!WARNING!! EXPLICIT VIOLENCE MILD LANGUAGE MATURE: 15+ ACE OF SPADES! SEASON I EP. 1 - Pilot Solar System, 10th May, 2011, Vectronian spaceship, one of many from planet Vectron, a small planet with a large population, one made out of liquid.The planet's main objective is to conquer the Universe.What they did not know, is that someone from their side, was about to betray them, with the mission of stopping the Vectronians from conquering other planets..It the meeting room of the ship, the head of intelligence, as well as other high rank aliens, were discussing about the next attack. *Alien: We need a new world to conquer.A world that is indeed ahead with technology. *Alien2: Yes, not like Mars.I still have sand in my underwear. *Commander: You don't wear underwear you bunch of stinky phlegm! Ojiskbi, turn on the map. On the large, round table, out of a small square, appeared a hologram, showing the entire Solar System and its surroundings. *Commander: My lord, the last planet we conquered was Mars.We'll move on until we reach the last planet near the sun.And looks like, in our way, it stands Earth.It would be of good advantage to conquer it. *Alien3: I don't know... when we went on Earth they had a pretty advanced technology.It was hard to get some bodies.But the stupid humans, Americans especially, only think about themselves and that hot boiled canine covered with a mysterious red substance.They might have a technology even better than Mars', and the martians nearly destroyed us! *Alien: Yes, the martians nearly destroyed us.And yes, Americans are idiots. *Commander: That is why, we need to be prepared.We will strike Earth on 22nd December 2012! What do you say, my lord? *Lord: Hmm... very well then.On 22nd December, 2012, we strike Earth! We will conquer! Glory to Vectron! *Everyone: Glory to Vectron! *Tyrobali: But didn't we conquer enough planets? We took half of the Solar System, plus many other in Alpha Centauri.I don't think I can have any more of these barbaric methods.I've seen enough livings die. *Commander: You disobey what our lord said?! Tyrobali, you were one of our best and elite soldiers! Now, you're weak! *Tyrobali: I think it's pretty enough! *Alien2: Our soldiers already took control of some human bodies.Tyrobali, if you disobey us, you'll be released from the rank of Lieutenant, and go back on the planet. *Tyrobali: But... *Commander: Is it a way or another: you go back on Vectron or you fight! *Tyrobali: Sigh... *Lord: I think we discussed enough, meeting is over. As everyone went out of the meeting room, Tyrobali was heading towards his room, when he was stopped by the Commander. *Commander: What is wrong with you?! *Tyrobali: What is wrong with me?! What is wrong with you?! All you want is to conquer, conquer and conquer! If every living dies, you won't have anything to conquer! *Commander: Enough! Tomorrow you're going back on Vectron! *Tyrobali: I'm tired of this anyway! In his room, Tyrobali entered a capsule, and went deep in thoughts. *Tyrobali: I can't take this anymore... I have to warn the humans! But, if I leave this ship, I risk to die.Within 24 hours, I'll evaporate... What can I do? After some minutes of thinking, he finally decided what he wanted to do. *Tyrobali: That's it! I will go on Earth and warn everyone! I will need someone I can unify with.And I better find someone fast.I will recruit others like me who decided to run from this army! I'm officialy a rebel! Time to get out! Tyrobali pressed a button in the capsule, which went quickly throught a tube, leading outside the ship.The capsule was heading with extreme speed towards Earth.It was heading towards Europe.But, as it was advancing in high speed, it hit a satellite, and the course was changed and speed was lowered.Now, Tyrobali was heading with the speed of a slime, towards the North American continent, straight in the middle of the United States of America. *Tyrobali: Oh no! Now it'll take around 19 hours to land! They should have made these capsules better so I can actually survive in them! Chicago, 11th May, 2011, 00:27 AM.Acelius Connor, a thirty four year old man in a black coat, a lonely gangster on the streets, just got out of a bar.He was heading to his house, when he heard a strange noise coming out of an alleyway.He went to check on what happened, when he saw something moving out of a trash can.He quickly took out his Revolver and aimed at it. *Ace: What the hell? Who's there? *Tyrobali: Human... help... me... *Ace: What... what are ya? *Tyrobali: My name is Tyrobali... I came to warn you, about an invasion... but help me first... *Ace: Hell no! Best is to get rid of you! *Tyrobali: Please! Give me a chance! *Ace: W-What you want? *Tyrobali: I want to... *jumps on Ace's chest* Just combine with your body! *Ace: Damn get off! As Tyrobali was trying to combine with Ace, when he arrived on his head, and in his brain, he was stopped by a shock and jumped off Ace. *Ace: Son of a bitch! *Tyrobali: I... I can't believe it! *Ace: You can't believe what? That I can shoot ya? First see the bullet, then if you survive, believe it! *Tyrobali: You should've been controlled by me! You are the chosen one! *Ace: Chosen one for what? *Tyrobali: You, can save this world! *Ace: By what? *Tyrobali: By the invaders from my planet! They want to conquer Earth in 2012! You are the chosen one! *Ace: So what the heck can I do? *Tyrobali: What we can do... we must combine! Inside you, I've seen faith, courage and mercy.That is the kind of savior this planet needs. *Ace: You already tried to combine with me, and it kinda hurts! *Tyrobali: That was the forced one, the easier one is other method.Let me explain... Once we combine, I must pass through your memories from the age of three, then take the shape of your personality.So can we try? *Ace: What's in it for me? *Tyrobali: You can get special powers depending on your personality. *Ace: But why am I the chosen one... I'm just a gangster, making a living on crimes. *Tyrobali: Want to try or not? *Ace: So be it.Let's do it! Tyrobali jumped again on Ace's chest, and combined with him, this time in a less painful mode.After he completely covered him in a black liquid, the liquid dissapeared and Ace's body was back.He then looked at himself, finding nothing out of the ordinary. *Ace: That was weird... Not feeling anything... *Tyrobali: Yep, indeed! *Ace: What the?! Where are ya?! *Tyrobali: Inside you! Let me annlyse your memories and personality... Who... Whoa... What a past... Okay taking a shape, here we go! As Ace's eyes were glowing yellow, they pulsed a ray, the ray formed a vortex, and out of the vortex came an angel like creature. *Tyrobali: Well check that! I took a form on your personality! *Ace: An angel? That's like my opposite... *Tyrobali: Well I've seen your memories... what happened exactly? You have anger in your past, and those men... *Ace: Yeah.I'll explain to you... I was born in a rich family, but my mom died when I was six.My dad, who was working for the Mafia, was arrested while trying to rob a bank.He was sentenced to life in prison.My dad's money is now mine.Anyway, the worst started in 2003, while I was working for the Mafia.We were in a war with a rival cartel.One night, when I was in my house, playing poker with friends, and when my wife and six year old daughter were in the same room, they came in... They took out everyone.Those were 30 seconds of my life, of ethernal pain.I've seen my friends and family falling dead because of the gunshots... I've ran away, and hid in another house.The cartel was on my tail, but I lost them.I was so blind because of the anger, that I modified my Revolver, went at the cartel headquarters, and shot everyone there.No one survived... *Tyrobali: Whoa, it's tougher to hear that from you than read it from your memories. *Ace: Maybe... and about you, your name was? *Tyrobali: My name's Tyrobali. *Ace: Oh yeah, Twinkle Toes. *Tyrobali: What?! No, it's Tyrobali! *Ace: I'll just call you T.B., okay? *Tyrobali: Yeah, okay... *Ace: So what now? *Tyrobali: They probably sent some scouts after me.If I combine with someone the hard way, they can find me, but if I do it the easy way, it only takes two days for the trace to dissapear. *Ace: And how can you find these scouts? *Tyrobali: By those ugly mutant like creatures with red eyes behind you. *Ace: By the what the hell like what behind who? As Ace turned around, he saw himself face to face with a creature.The creature tried to attack Ace, but he managed to dodge the attack and jump behind. *Ace: What the fuck?! *Tyrobali: Yep, those ugly things are my ex-companions. *Ace: Were? That's good... *takes out Revolver* Head or stomach? *Tyrobali: I got a better idea! Show your left hand! Tyrobali turned into an orb of bright light, and landed on Ace's hand.Then, Ace inserted the orb in the gun, which turned bright.Ace pressed the trigger, and out of the barrel blew out a bright laser, that took out the creatures in front of them.After that, Tyrobali came out of the Revolver, and they went to Ace's house to rest.At his house, they were discussing about the powers. *Ace: That was pretty interesting... *Tyraboli: You've seen nothing! Just image you have some wings! *Ace: Why should I do that? *Tyraboli: Try it! *Ace: Okay... Ace closed his eyes, and imagined himself having a pair of angel wings on his back.Then, when he opened his eyes, he noticed he had the wings on his back. *Ace: Whoa... *Tyrobali: You know, you could just imagine the wings, without closing your eyes.Now hide them. *Ace: Okay, err... done? *Tyrobali: Nice! You're getting the hang of it! Now, besides the laser gun, you learned to control the wings.You only need a flight test. *Ace: Tomorrow, T.B., not tonight, I'm too tired.Want a drink? *Tyrobali: What drink? *Ace: A beer? *Tyrobali: What's a beer? *Ace: It's a drink with alcohol... *Tyrobali: I heard it makes you go insane. *Ace: Then you'll drink only water! -To be continued... Acelius Connor: THEME SONG: Ace of Spades by Motörhead [may be same with the series theme, but who cares] Now guys, I want you to: -Notice me of mistakes -Give me some other suggestions Guys I just hoped you enjoyed it! Thanks, ~Samil

Do you have some kinda problem or what? I don't think you should swear like some insane madman, also speaking some kinda Japanese-English combined street language.First of all try to write in normal English language, second watch your mouth and try not to swear, third get a doctor.

Indeed, compared with me, I'm like a little kid.He is indeed talented, and most other amateur writers like me have what to learn from him.

Did you tell me to shut up or what lol, I didn't understand. A: OMEGA Q: What is located at the very north-west of San Andreas, Tierra Robada area? HINT: Glows at night.

Well, I didn't quite understand anything of what you said above. But fine, let's get on with it.Tomorrow as I post, I await your guidance on how to continue.

Well that was a pain in the butt, but answer is: Hotknife Q: In what location was the mission 'The Truth is Out There' supposed to be set?

You say I won't post the text directly on the site? Where exactly can I post them? EDIT: But what if I create just one topic, and post the first episode.Then edit the post every time a new episode comes?

Fine then.Tomorrow's the first episode.Now one more question bothers me, should I post all episodes in one topic or in separate topics?

Well mate, thanks for the encouragement.So be it then, I will post one episode each, let's say, Friday.Only thing I feared was to have problems with admins, again.

Hey guys! So, 2 years passed since I last posted a story on this forum.Some of them were bad, some not.Since the loss of the story I was working on for a year, I started another one.This is a quick description: -Based on real life, has nothing to do with GTA, though some references may be found -Fantasy and Sci-Fi -Large number of characters -Future manga/anime [hope so] -As always, Mature Content -Divided in chapters, each with a number of episodes, each with its own name -Team effort, doing this with another friend, and also some other mates -Also added credits, thanking the people that inspired me and/or helped me -Crude humor So the question is if you guys allow me to post an episode weekly.It would be nice to have some readers.Note I will only post if you agree. Thanks, ~Samil EDIT: Oops, forgot to mention: -Story name: Ace of Spades -Inspired by: 'Ace of Spades' song by Motorhead -Main Character: Acelius 'Ace' Connor -Short story: Aliens are trying to conquer Earth, but a rebel arrived on Earth, and found Acelius Connor, a lone gangster, on the streets of Chicago.They combined their powers to fight the Vectronians.Together with their new friends, they try to stop the invasion from 22nd December 2012 [events started on May 11th 2011]