Are you sure?
I suggest you give more actions like in the beginning.
( Villagers are walking along the village peacefully )
( Robber get's chased thrpugh the village by a cop )
( Jorge walks wheelbarrow to barn whiel puffing and panting from it's weight. )
( Juan stacks the hay while moanign that she always has to do the stacking )
( All villagers talk and gossip etc etc.. )
( Camera swerves to the church and then zoom inside the door which is then taken away by another camera inside the church )
(Juan stacks hay)
(Isabella stirring food over fire pit sipping from time to time.)
(At church)
(Lio, Rosalie and Julio kneel and pray)
Samuel: (Runs to Isabella with a worried face) ( dramatically )Mama, over the hill! Savages! There’s a whole group of them coming this way!
(All villagers in area get up and run to the top of the hill and then there eyes widen and they drop there jaws. )
(A large group of about 500 tired and angry people walk towards the village with a fierce man on a horse in front with a brainless maniac with a bloodied chainsaw.)
Favourite part?
The Cabinet. Maniac is so dumb there. Jack should've bled to death and shoudl have teh maniac too though.
Least Favourite?
The beginning it seemed boring and a good grab in always works.
Overall?
7/10
Edit: Erased double line.
Edit 2: Oh sorry I see at the end that Luis and stuff. Sorry, I didn't read that part slowly.