Samil Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Please vote how good are my stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOXIC Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 A suggestion, STOP making stories on ghost of Sonni Forelli, Ghost of TOXIC, ghost of Samil, Ghost of linkin' park, ghost of keyboard, ghost of... Be creative, try not to 'Ghost' everything that comes your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 You should add some more options, not so estreme ones, add a medium one for example. You see I don't think your stories are awesome( far from that) but I don't think they're boring either, they're okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustADummy Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Exactly. Be creative, make stories like.. some GOOD fanfiction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Guys there is no need to be harsh. Your stories are fine, you might want to decrease the amount of bold you're using though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samil Posted August 11, 2008 Author Share Posted August 11, 2008 (edited) I don't care what you guys say I continue making stories with what I want.Oh and, NOBODY INSULTS LINKIN' PARK! These stories are about GTA, and cause GTA are violent games, my stories can't say ... CJ and Denise were running happy on a field full with flowers!That would be: 1.Boring 2.Descusting This will have nothing awesome. Edited August 11, 2008 by Samil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 (edited) I don't care what you guys say I continue making stories with what I want.Oh and, NOBODY INSULTS LINKIN' PARK!These stories are about GTA, and cause GTA are violent games, my stories can't say ... CJ and Denise were running happy on a field full with flowers!That would be: 1.Boring 2.Descusting This will have nothing awesome. If you don't care about our opinion then why create a topic asking for it? I hate Linkin Park btw Edited August 11, 2008 by IVAN ALEXANDROV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 I think he was hoping for critique rather than critism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hansui Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 yeah, constructive criticism is what he need... it would help him a lot if you will tell him about the things where he failz (like using of too much bold and kinda unbelievable storyline) i haven't read any of your stories rightnow, thats why i can't give you any good critique for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustADummy Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 I don't care what you guys say I continue making stories with what I want.Oh and, NOBODY INSULTS LINKIN' PARK!These stories are about GTA, and cause GTA are violent games, my stories can't say ... CJ and Denise were running happy on a field full with flowers!That would be: 1.Boring 2.Descusting This will have nothing awesome. We are giving you advice to make GOOD stories and now you're ignoring us? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damjan Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Your stories are.... Poor (no offense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas. Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 I say they are boring. I've read one but I haven't read the others, there are simply too much and the amount of topics is beginning to annoy me and many others. That's the only reason this forum (Graphics and Writers Pad) is actually active because people are discussing these so called 'ghost' stories. People would actually like them if you created topics about a month after the previous instead of just posting day after the other, that's what I would call "Raising your post count". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustADummy Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 (edited) Adding to what you said: It's also called SPAMMING. Edited August 11, 2008 by S-V Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockstarrem Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 They're boring right now, keep practicing. Also, CJ and Denise running through a field with flowers or something? LOLWUT? We're just saying not EVERYTHING needs to be paranormal. If you're going to make a paranormal story, at least do some research into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samil Posted August 11, 2008 Author Share Posted August 11, 2008 Can't you just shut up? Just keep your hands, legs and the rest of your body home! Stop critiqing me I don't care if you're a mod or not! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrLlamaLlama Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 You ASKED for critique, now you're telling him shut up? Topic locked. Any more disrespect towards moderators will land you a suspension. Think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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