Samil Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) ===================================================WAR IN SAN ANDREAS================================================= A terrible war between the gangs began in San Andreas.Many people, cops and gang members were killed in the war.The Grove street families were allied with the Triads and Los Aztecas.They had a little HQ somewhere underground.The HQ ws heavily protected and nobody knew about it. CJ: I can't belive this! War in the whole country! Sweet: Bro we will have to stay and fight! Cesar: Yeah ese! Now that we are allies those Ballas, Vagos and the rest of the motherfuckers are owned! CJ: Yeah man I know! Okay we will stand and fight! For Grove street and for the whole country. Woozie: CJ, I recommend we first take control of Las Venturas.Then San Fierro and then Los Santos. CJ: Alright Woozie! You heard him guys, time to take those pushers down! Sweet: I'm down! Cesar: Me too ese! Woozie: Me too! Everybody: Let's go! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So they get into their boats, and went to Las Venturas.But when they arrived at the dock, they saw some mobsters guarding it.They stopped and they had an advantage cause it was foggy.A Grove street gangster and a Triad took their sniper rifles and shot the mobsters one by one.Then they docked there and hopped in the modsters cars.They reached the Four Dragons Casino.It was full of mobsters but they had to take control of it.So they rushed in and started killing the mobsters.When all mobsters were dead, Woozie went to his desk.Hi pressed a button, even though it took 3 minutes for him to find it and the desk opened.Inside the desk were some Mp5's, M4's, SPAZ 12's, satcel charges and a Heat seeker rocket launcher.They took the weapons and some Triads remained at the casino to guard it. Next target was Caligulas Casino.The streets were crawling with mobsters patroling on foot and in cars, so they did drive-bys.They reached Caligulas but in front were 2 guards with M4's.They took them out and other mobsters came.They blocked the way with the cars and killed the mobsters.Then they advanced in the Casino were they found more mobsters with more weapons.A mobster with a sniper rifle was in the back and tried to shot CJ but missed althrough CJ had a scratch from the bullet.CJ saw the sniper and shot him in the head.Then they advanced to the blackjack tables and took cover there.More mobsters were coming but they didn't had a chance infront of the team.After all mobs were dead, some Grove street gangsters were guarding the Casino while Cj, Woozie, Sweet and Cesar took the elevatr to te top level.There they killed more mobsters and advanced into Salvatore's office.They rushed in and there he was. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CJ: Hello, mister Leone! Salvatore: You again! Heh, so you are here to kill me? Sweet: You're going down motherfucker! Salvatore: Okay if you want! Before they could shoot, Salvatore jumped through the window.They ran at the window to see and then they saw a Maveric taking Salvatore and the mobsters retreating with their cars. CJ: Yeah! Cesar: We did it ese! Sweet: Of course we did it! Woozie: Now to take care of the rest of Venturas! Suddenly they heared a sound coming from the floor.They found a secret door and inside were Kent Paul, Maccer and Rosie. CJ: What the fuck? Kent Paul: Thanks mate. Rosie: Yeah! I mean we though we gonna stand there for ages! No food, no water, no ladies ... Kent Paul: He said "Thank you"! Maccer: Well I say: Thanks! Thank you! Merci! Gracias! CJ: Whatever! Sweet: Come on bro, we have a whole Venturas to take control of. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- They cleared whole Las Venturas and when they finally took control they went to Four Dragons to continue their mission. Cesar: Okay cabron, we have control over Las Venturas.Now to take out San Fierro. Sweet: Yeah but we will have to go throug the desert. CJ: And in the desert are those Red neck assholes. Woozie: Yes but they are poor.They only have pistols.We have high class weapons. Sweet: Right! So let's move on! CJ: Wait a sec! I only have a question! What happened to AREA 69? Cesar: I heared that it was taken over by the Red ... necks ... and ... oh no! Sweet: So looks like it won't be that easy afterall. CJ: Yeah man but we never give up! Sweet, Cesar & Woozie: Yeah! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So they went in the desert with all weapons they can take.When they were near AREA 69, Woozie used the binoculars to see.But cause he couldn't see anything, he gave the binoculars to CJ and he took a look.He saw 2 Red necks guarding the gate.They decided to enter through another entrance.So they cut the wire and entered.They saw a bunch of Red necks patroling.They wanted to remain silenced so they reached the tower and from that some Grove street gangsters covered and used their sniper rifles to clear the other towers and the Red necks on ground.Then they advanced underground where they killed more Red necks.They arrived at the labs and they saw the leader of the Red necks.He throwed a grenade that broke the window and exploded.They had luck they managed to take cover.Then the Red necks started shooting at them while their leader escape.CJ saw the leader and shot him in the head.Then the group took care of the rest of the Red necks.When they finished everything in AREA 69, they went to the snake farm where they finished more Red necks then they advanced to the Bayside Marina.There they saw a Red neck with a minigun shooting like mad in them.They took cover and a sniper shot the Red neck and then the team finished all the red necks remaining. CJ: Okay the desert is secured. Woozie: Now to take control of San Fierro. Sweet: Well then let's go! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- They crossed the bridge and when they reached the other side they were stopped by a rocket.They got out of their cars and started looking for the person with the rocket launcher.They looked behind and saw a Rifa on the top of the bridge.They shot him and he fell in the water.Then they advanced and were stopped by a road block.They shot the Rifas blocking the street and blew up their cars and then continued.They reached Jizzy's club were more Rifas were guarding the door.After they were wasted they entered and more Rifas advanced towards them.It didn't take long until all Rifas in the club were wasted. After they finished with the club they had to take over the garage.When they arrived there the Rifas were all over.They got out of the cars and andavced to the garage, killing everybody that was standing infront of them.More Rifas were coming from the station and from the construction side but, they all died.The team took control over the garage.Now that they got rid of the Rifas, they had to get rid of the Da Nang Boys too.So they went to the airport where their base was and started wasting everybody there.They went inside the airport and killed the remaining Da Nang Boys.They had to destroy their ships so they took the Heat seeking rocket launchers and destroyed the 2 ships.Now they only had to clear the rest of San Fierro.After controling the rest of San Fierro, they returned to the garage. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Woozie: Now that we have control over San Fierro, I better get back to my betting shop so, see you later guys! CJ: See ya Woozie! Sweet: See ya blind ninja! So Woozie returned to his betting shop.CJ and the rest remained at the garage to discuss. Cesar: Now the big one. Sweet: Right ... Los Santos. CJ: Okay then let's go! So they went to LS, through the countryside and when they reached there, it was like Hell on Earth.Everywhere were only guts, dead gang members and exploded cars.They went to Temple where they took some Temple drive families gang members.Then they reached Glen Park where Ballas were everywhere and they spotted the Families group.They fought with the Ballas and wasted everybody near Glen Park.They secured Glen Park and had to advance.They went to Los Flores to take out theVagos.They saw the Vagos patroling the streets and fighting with the Ballas.They interfered and killed everybody on the each side.Then they had to go to Grove street. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When they arrived there, they saw Grove street families gangsters fighting with Ballas.They interfered and killed the Ballas.There they reloaded their weapons, took more ammo and recuited more gangsters.Then they had to go to the airport to help the Los Aztecas.When they reached there, the Aztecas were fighting with the Vagos.They hopped on the houses and killed all Vagos there.There, Cesar took Sunny, Gal and Hazer to help them.Next taget was Seville Boulevard.They hopped in some Aztecas cars and went there right away.When tehy arrived, it was massacre.The Ballas were killing all Seville Blvd. Families gangsters.So CJ told Sunny to blast the Ballas with his RPG and the rest will kill them with their guns.So Sunny blasted them in Hell and the rest killed the Ballas with their guns. Now that all Los Aztecas and Families turfs were secured, they had to take control of the rest of LS.They did drive-bys, blasted them on foot.When they finally took control over LS and whole San Andreas, peace was all over.Grove street families took control over central North, West, North-West and North-East LS and had other turfs in SF, LV, desert and countryside, the Triads took control over SF and South Las Venturas and the Los Aztecas took East, South-East and South-West LS and the rest of LV. The next day on Grove street was a huge party.In a corner, CJ, Sweet, Cesar and Woozie discussed. CJ: Now that everything is "normal", the gangs are in peace, whole San Andreas is in peace, we can rela our whole lives. Woozie: I can continue doing bussiness at my betting shop and casino ... Cesar: And I am now the leader of Aztecas ... Sweet: And Grove street is rebuilt and in top. CJ: Well I say ... things can't be better! Everybody: Yeah! ==== END ==== * Hope you liked it! 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Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 I didn't like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samil Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 And why not exactly? What wasn't good at it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) At least it wasn't a ghost story. Not really bad I guess, just meh. Edited August 12, 2008 by IVAN ALEXANDROV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samil Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 And why not exactly? What wasn't good at it? It was really really boring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA Don Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Please say that this is going to be your last story for a long long time... I thought it was definitely better than your other "the ghost of" stories, maybe you should work on your grammar as well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Please say that this is going to be your last story for a long long time... I thought it was definitely better than your other "the ghost of" stories, maybe you should work on your grammar as well... He won't, since he said that we would stop if we din't like his story and I believe no ones does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustADummy Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Also, Samil, you don't want a ban for making a story each hour do you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 It would be fine if they were actually fun and interesting to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas. Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Another topic, Wow? I've never seen someone post so many topics in a week, this forum is only minor compared what he's posted elsewhere. In my opinion it is average, maybe you should listen to people's thoughts for once, Samil. Just like Rockstarrem said the other day back that you should write in a paragraph form, I completely agree with him. I can't be bothered to read that up there simply because it does not look like a book or a story that I would read. I would rather prefer reading a book or a story that has the Paragraph form. I have wrote a story like that before and my possible next one will be in Paragraph form and my stories were posted 4 months ago not a day ago like what you are doing. I kind of think you are copying and pasting text from elsewhere the rate you are posting these. I would suggest that you stop posting these kind of topics for a while but why should I bother you don't listen to a single thing anyone says anyway so what would be the point in trying. Expect a ban, suspension or warning in the near future, that's what I think right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkali64 Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Okay, i agree with Thomas that he should space his topics out a bit more. But Connor, your just being a dick... Samil's obviously put a lot of effort into his stories so the least you could do is give him some CC for it. If you don't like his stories, simply ignore them. Your not helping anyone saying things like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) Don't be such a failface, if you would of read around prior to posting, you would've known that Samil doesn't take CC and disrespect members(including admins and moderators) for giving it. I said I didn't like his story, he asked why, I gave him a reason. What's wrong with that? Vasco. /// RIP Bernie Mac. says:Meh tell alkaline to lick a cock from me Edited August 12, 2008 by Connor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas. Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 But Alkaline is right, all you're doing is insulting him in three separate posts. It would be fine if they were actually fun and interesting to read. It was really really boring... I didn't like it. You could have said why you didn't like them and how he could improve upon that instead of saying the same except re-worded in each of the above quotes from this very topic alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harwood Butcher Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 But Alkaline is right, all you're doing is insulting him in three separate posts.It would be fine if they were actually fun and interesting to read. It was really really boring... I didn't like it. You could have said why you didn't like them and how he could improve upon that instead of saying the same except re-worded in each of the above quotes from this very topic alone. Everyone has been trying to tell Samil what he should do to improve his stories and he either doesn't pay attention or is too lazy to edit the stories that he is copying and pasting into these topics. So I think Connor is taking a different approach and telling him that his stories are awful so that he'll stop posting them. In a way, Connor is trying to do Samil a favor by getting him to stop making all these stories before he gets banned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas. Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Everyone is trying to help him though. But it has got to a point where nobody is bothered if they post something or not because either way he will probably end up banned because he didn't take our advice. Last night he was even arguing or insulting Moderators (Specifically Rockstarrem (and perhaps Llama)) and yet I don't think he will take my advice to stop doing it. So he better listen to what me, Connor, you, Alkaline etc. says otherwise he may end up being banned. He isn't even accepting ideas from his own "Samil's Stories" topic where he asks if people liked them. If he continues to write them while nobody likes them in his previous style, he isn't going to be rather popular with his stories across the forum. Right now his approval as a new member is getting rather low because people are sick of seeing his stories. I'm not meant to say this but i have actually been laughing at them (With numerous other people - on MSN and other places) and using them as an excuse to keep me from being bored (Usually that meant listening to music or going off to play Fifa 08 or PES 2008) that means they aren't funny 'Haha' but funny in a strange way. Maybe he should try listening or taking our advice then he will improve and have an even less chance of being shouted at by us. It's a pain in the arse right now with the amount of these topics being made, that's about 8 made this week (From Wednesday last week onwards) that makes me wonder if he is actually typing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkali64 Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) Vasco. /// RIP Bernie Mac. says:Meh tell alkaline to lick a cock from me LOL! Well, why don't you go and tell Vasco too... no. Don't be such a failface, if you would of read around prior to posting, you would've known that Samil doesn't take CC and disrespect members(including admins and moderators) for giving it. I said I didn't like his story, he asked why, I gave him a reason. What's wrong with that? You didn't give him a reason... All your giving him is shit, and that's no good for anybody is it? The least you could do is tell him why his stories are so bad (Which ya didn't.) if that doesn't work, don't say anything at all. Edited August 12, 2008 by Alkaline_64 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TM™ Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 I have to agree with Connor their, if you look through some previous posts, he isn't showing the respect he should to most of us, he did insult a moderator at some point. He even wanted constructive criticism, but he didn't even listen to that. Samil, if you really don't want our constructive criticism, then don't bother making more stories, it's starting to bother everyone including myself, but this doesn't stop you from making stories as long as their much longer, have more dialogues and at some point, extra stuff. Also, if this is your longest, make it longer, keep a story going, and focus on that, rather than make another topic up again. And if you're thinking this is insulting you, it's not, you're either lazy or you don't really listen to what most of us are saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate10 Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 I wouldn't mind his stories if he just made one topic to put all his stories in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrLlamaLlama Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Vasco. /// RIP Bernie Mac. says:Meh tell alkaline to lick a cock from me LOL! Well, why don't you go and tell Vasco too... no. Don't be such a failface, if you would of read around prior to posting, you would've known that Samil doesn't take CC and disrespect members(including admins and moderators) for giving it. I said I didn't like his story, he asked why, I gave him a reason. What's wrong with that? You didn't give him a reason... All your giving him is shit, and that's no good for anybody is it? The least you could do is tell him why his stories are so bad (Which ya didn't.) if that doesn't work, don't say anything at all. Connor gave a perfectly valid reason. He finds them boring, ie, not interesting to read. He is right that Samil can't even take CC, he ended up telling various people to 'shut up' when they tried to help him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 As he finds it acceptable to be disrespectful, he won't mind it in his own topic. It's also funny that some certain individuals will only take a shot at me when I've been verbally kicked down by someone else, you fucking cowardly shits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkali64 Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Connor gave a perfectly valid reason. He finds them boring, ie, not interesting to read. He is right that Samil can't even take CC, he ended up telling various people to 'shut up' when they tried to help him. "They're boring" isn't a reason. You'd need something to explain what you found boring for it to be classed as a reason. But tbh i'm getting bored with this now. Connor is right that you shouldn't directly tell an Admin to shut up. I just hate seeing new members getting flamed like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harwood Butcher Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 As he finds it acceptable to be disrespectful, he won't mind it in his own topic.It's also funny that some certain individuals will only take a shot at me when I've been verbally kicked down by someone else, you fucking cowardly shits. Woo, calm down, you don't wanna get banned. Don't let Samil bring you down with him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Connor gave a perfectly valid reason. He finds them boring, ie, not interesting to read. He is right that Samil can't even take CC, he ended up telling various people to 'shut up' when they tried to help him. "They're boring" isn't a reason. You'd need something to explain what you found boring for it to be classed as a reason. But tbh i'm getting bored with this now. Connor is right that you shouldn't directly tell an Admin to shut up. I just hate seeing new members getting flamed like that. So just because he's new that he's off the hook? He acted like a noob various times, no wonder he gets flamed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) Connor gave a perfectly valid reason. He finds them boring, ie, not interesting to read. He is right that Samil can't even take CC, he ended up telling various people to 'shut up' when they tried to help him. "They're boring" isn't a reason. You'd need something to explain what you found boring for it to be classed as a reason. But tbh i'm getting bored with this now. Connor is right that you shouldn't directly tell an Admin to shut up. I just hate seeing new members getting flamed like that. Woah, I don't need to explain anything...and I don't need you to explain to me the concept of reason... Edited August 12, 2008 by Connor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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