Make Up Your Own Story For GTA IV

[K9 Krew]

this is just to look at what everybody wants heres mine:

cj and salvatore are at war still due to the casino robbing , salvotre is then killed later on and it shows tommy rising to power in vice city and some other place and then we have luade before he was shot and there is a storyline that invovles them all some how i donno really just somthing i thought up in a minute

[SonOfLiberty]

Here's mine.

The main character is in prison, because he was framed for the assasination of the president, of the USA by the local Mafia. (He was working for them blah blah blah). Anyway a year goes by and he decides to develop a plan to escape from prison. When he escapes, he discovers that the Mafia who he was framed by, has moved across the state and he must find them. (Doing missons along the way)

When he finds them, he disguises himself as an unknown low life and begins working for them (True GTA style). He begins building up the don's trust and the don reveals to him, that they are planning another assasination.

After all the planning, the main character prepares for the assasination, but when the don least suspects it, the main character goes into the don's office and shoots the don silently.

Leaving a note on the don's body and quickly escapes and fleas the country, leaving the mafia dumfounded, thus opening the next part of the story.

I know it's not that great, but I was trying for something original and I didn't add any specific names, because I don't know who the characters/gangs will be.

Edited December 8, 2006 by MiamiViceCity

[K9 Krew]

Here's mine.

The main character is in prison, because he was framed for the assasination of the president, of the USA by the local Mafia. (He was working for them blah blah blah). Anyway a year goes by and he decides to develop a plan to escape from prison. When he escapes, he discovers that the Mafia who he was framed by, has moved across the state and he must find them. (Doing missons along the way)

When he finds them, he disguises himself as an unknown low life and begins working for them (True GTA style). He begins building up the don's trust and the don reveals to him, that they are planning another assasination.

After all the planning, the main character prepares for the assasination, but when the don least suspects it, the main character goes into the don's office and shoots the don silently.

Leaving a note on the don's body and quickly escapes and fleas the country, leaving the mafia dumfounded, thus opening the next part of the story.

That would be a great start and then he continues his way till the don's brothers gang wants revenge that would be awesome

I know it's not that great, but I was trying for something original and I didn't add any specific names, because I don't know who the characters/gangs will be.

[blnk182fan18]

your a 28 year old white male that is a cop, he is good with computers and cars and guns. as a cop you are assigned to check out a robbery at a Bank. when you go you are immediatly fire at from all directions. you have your little 9mm handgun and they have riffles. you get hit and then somone comes and takes you in their car and drives off to a house deep in a forest. from there you are a cop that has been framed to be in on the action. Smart badguys , they got away with a bank robbery at your expence. so now you are pissed, your life is getting all screwed up, cops are after you and you lost your job, your in a house thats in the middle of knowhere with some weird man and girl that treated your wounds. from their you must get these people back but it is going to be very hard to find out who did it. the peoples house you stay at are very into cars and own a shop in the city. they offer to house you their and offer you help. they are heavy street racers and there are alot of people in the street racing business that need money for their cars, so maybe it has to do with them, but we dont know, along the way we will meet new people, all kinds of people!. They will give usnew jobs to do and start a new living in this city, and occasionaly there will be cops who are looking for you. its going to be a tough one but im sure we will live through it and findout who these scums are that took everything away from you. Along the ay we will meet street racers, business men, bums, other hitmen, and even some dirty cops that ge in on the action that make you do some crazy missions like find a cruise ship way out in the ocean and aboard it from plane to parachutte at night in all black tacticle outfit. where you will then locate a man on the cruise ship sleeping and kill him with your silenced pistol and steal the laptp he has and some cash. but you can be spotted or cops will be called and you will have a bunch of helipcopters and police boats to avoid. its going to be intence but its also going to be a great adventure.

[Bear]

Here's mine.

The main character is in prison, because he was framed for the assasination of the president, of the USA by the local Mafia. (He was working for them blah blah blah). Anyway a year goes by and he decides to develop a plan to escape from prison. When he escapes, he discovers that the Mafia who he was framed by, has moved across the state and he must find them. (Doing missons along the way)

When he finds them, he disguises himself as an unknown low life and begins working for them (True GTA style). He begins building up the don's trust and the don reveals to him, that they are planning another assasination.

After all the planning, the main character prepares for the assasination, but when the don least suspects it, the main character goes into the don's office and shoots the don silently.

Leaving a note on the don's body and quickly escapes and fleas the country, leaving the mafia dumfounded, thus opening the next part of the story.

That would be a great start and then he continues his way till the don's brothers gang wants revenge that would be awesome

I know it's not that great, but I was trying for something original and I didn't add any specific names, because I don't know who the characters/gangs will be.

Dude, what the hell what the point in this post. You didnt post anything you just quoted. Well done on raising your post count.

Isnt there a topic just like this?

[SonOfLiberty]

Nah he did post.

It's within my post. Take a closer look.

[E.J.]

he shouldn't of put it in your thing. he should've put it on his own thing so people could know what he said.

[SonOfLiberty]

Yeah I guess that's true.

[K9 Krew]

yeh sorry about that guys i stuffed up

[Harwood Butcher]

I dont know about you guys but I think it would be cool if we're Claude, Tommy and CJ again and they leave Liberty, Vice City and San Andreas. GTAIV will be with Claude then GTAIV Part 2 would be Tommy again, etc.

A lot of you probably just want it all scrapt with new everything but I wouldnt mind having the same characters but different storylines and maps. Did you guys hate those main characters that much?

[Liberty Overlord]

One problem with your story Wu Zi. You kill Salvatore in GTA3 when he doublecrosses you and you kill him to get revenge (I was lazy and just rocket launched his car). So it would be hard for Salvatore to die in GTA4 if he's already dead in GTA3.

Im sad now bc I'm seeing more and more people who haven't played GTA3 and its such a good game.

[K9 Krew]

oh yeh kinda forgot bout that

[Timmy Vermicceli]

I really dont care,as long Tommy makes a comeback

[K9 Krew]

yeh that would be awsome if he made a apperence in the stroyline for a while

[Liberty Overlord]

Ok, I spent an hour writing this story, and I might write it as a fanfiction if I have any free time.

I, being the biased person I am, want to go back to Liberty City to see what has happened after GTA 3. It should start in Liberty City but go to London, Then Tokyo, Then Paris, Brazil, and finally, an american city based on a mix of the major cities in the US.

So it starts off years after GTA3, In Lib City, and tells about the fate of the Leone Mafia, since Salvatore died in the beginning of GTA3. Toni Cipriani will be the new Don, possibly renaming the Leone family mafia into the Cipriani Family mafia. You start off as a junior Zaibatshu (sp) member trying to build turf in the city, but with no luck. Your first few missions will be from the Zaibatshu leader, (name) and he sends you on a few missions trying to weaken whats left of the Yakuza, since The Yakuza are collapsing because of the death of Kenji and Asuka, they only own Fort Staunton. Eventually, your leader realises that even though the Yakuza are weak, they can not beat them with their tiny forces. He sends you to Toni Cipriani for help, in hopes of allying him. The mafia is also weak because of the death of salvatore.

Toni agrees to help you wipe out the remainders of the Yakuza if you run a few errands for him. You complete a few assassinations and such, and then he will tell you about his former associate, Claude, the main character in GTA3. Claude is the Kingpin-character of the city now, with his own gang backing him up on Staunton Island. Claude has an overseer-type control over all gangs, including the Leone/Cipriani mafia, and makes them pay a hefty sum to him or he will wipe the gang out. Cipriani makes you kill Claude, shooting him in the back as he carjacks a car. However, this causes a shootout between claude's mafia and you, resulting in you being driven out of the city by the LCPD.

You and the Zaibatshu must flee to London (of course, it will have a different fictional name) to start a new life outside of America, since you are wanted criminals there now. London is run by 2 major mobs and MI6, the British Intelligence. You and the Zaibatshu find a free district and claim it, causing a bit unrest in the other mobs.

The MI6 approaches you're gang first, but the MI6 agents are corrupt, and threaten to turn you over to america if you don't do their dirty deeds. You agree. The MI6 have you wipe out one of the mobs which infest the historical section of London (Big Ben, Old Buildings) After wiping them out, the MI6 betray you, calling over CIA agents to arrest you. However, you are saved by the second mob, who's territory is in the buisness/financial section of London. They help you in your war againsed the MI6 and CIA, until you wipe out the 3 corrupt MI6 agents and raid the american embassy. While in the american embassy, the female leader of the second mob, who is good with computers, wipes out your criminal record, making the LCPD forget who you are and end their chase.

However, when everything seems great and perfect, there's a big problem. You want to return back to Liberty, but the rest of the Zaibatshu want to stay in London and start their empire there. This argument results in a firefight, you have to kill all your Zaibatshu brothers in self defense, until [Leader] is the only one left. Before you can fight with "Leader", he shoots you in a cutscene, sending you to the hospital and completing the mission. When you wake up, "two weeks later", "Female London Mob Leader" tells you that "Zaibatshu Leader" returned to Tokyo to regroup. You follow him, unlocking Tokyo.

You don't recieve a warm welcome in Tokyo however, with the Tokyo Zaibatshu starting a firefight with you outside the airport. However, you are saved by a Tokyo Yakuza Girl, who assumes that you are Yakuza because...you're fighting the Zaibatshu. You play along because now that the Zaibatshu have betrayed you, you need a gang. You do a series of Yakuza missions. You befriend Yakuza Girl. She finds that the Tokyo Zaibatshu are gathering in a little condo on the north side. Before the gathering, you plant bombs there. When the group of Zaibatshu arrive, the bombs go off, killing all Zaibatshu there. "Evil Zaibatshu Leader", who wasn't at the gathering, ambushes you while driving to pick up a package, and a firefight errupts. You kill "Zaibatshu Leader" and end the first storyline.

Paris is unlocked.

The Yakuza assign you to a post in Paris, partially to get you away from Tokyo until the anger has died down. You mention in a cutscene that Paris "has no crime" as you meet your contact. Your french contact has you doing mild missions until you see a Brazillian Freighter dock and talk to French representitives. You decide to sneak on because you need a well earned vacation.

Brazil is unlocked.

Once in Brazil, you use your well earned money at a resort, just to get away from it all. However, when walking through the ghettos, you get mugged, and everything you have is removed. You're only choice is to beat the crap out of the street gangs in Vercetti-Mansion type missions. While shooting out a meeting place of the Red street gang, they surrender, giving you back your items if you do their missions. Of course, if you don't want your items and money, you can just kill them all.

Yakuza Girl arrives in Brazil, angered that you left Paris. You tell her that you wish to return to America, and she mentions about a Yakuza post in Little Japan in "American City"

American City (DC and Chicago) is unlocked

You go to "American City", based on Washington DC and Chicago, and do missions for the Yakuza there. When you finish the missions, one of which involves knocking off a politician, you find out that you didn't kill "Zaibatshu Leader" afterall, and that he was only seriously wounded. Oh No! He left for London with the Zaibatshu remnant, and you return to London to kill him.

Once back in London, there is a "Los Santos Riot" type setting, where the Zaibatshu remnant and the friendly London mob are battling it out in the streets. "Zaibatshu Leader" is on top of "Big Bill" a play on words for Big Ben. He is at the top and you must travel to the top, killing all Zaibatshu. At the top, "Zaibatshu Leader" says that you never learned how to shoot to kill. You are ambushed by 2 Zaibatshu, taking your weapons away, and giving you a Katana. You have a swordfight with "Zaibatshu Leader", and cut off his arm. He runs for his gun. Kill the 2 Zaibatshu guards, get your gun, and put rounds of bullets into "Zaibatshu Leader". When he is dead, you say "just making sure" and throw him off the top of Big Ben, making sure that he is dead. Credits Roll.

Edited December 10, 2006 by Liberty Overlord

[K9 Krew]

NICE!!! I Like It

[The GTA Man]

Ok, I spent an hour writing this story, and I might write it as a fanfiction if I have any free time.

I, being the biased person I am, want to go back to Liberty City to see what has happened after GTA 3. It should start in Liberty City but go to London, Then Tokyo, Then Paris, Brazil, and finally, an american city based on a mix of the major cities in the US.

So it starts off years after GTA3, In Lib City, and tells about the fate of the Leone Mafia, since Salvatore died in the beginning of GTA3. Toni Cipriani will be the new Don, possibly renaming the Leone family mafia into the Cipriani Family mafia. You start off as a junior Zaibatshu (sp) member trying to build turf in the city, but with no luck. Your first few missions will be from the Zaibatshu leader, (name) and he sends you on a few missions trying to weaken whats left of the Yakuza, since The Yakuza are collapsing because of the death of Kenji and Asuka, they only own Fort Staunton. Eventually, your leader realises that even though the Yakuza are weak, they can not beat them with their tiny forces. He sends you to Toni Cipriani for help, in hopes of allying him. The mafia is also weak because of the death of salvatore.

Toni agrees to help you wipe out the remainders of the Yakuza if you run a few errands for him. You complete a few assassinations and such, and then he will tell you about his former associate, Claude, the main character in GTA3. Claude is the Kingpin-character of the city now, with his own gang backing him up on Staunton Island. Claude has an overseer-type control over all gangs, including the Leone/Cipriani mafia, and makes them pay a hefty sum to him or he will wipe the gang out. Cipriani makes you kill Claude, shooting him in the back as he carjacks a car. However, this causes a shootout between claude's mafia and you, resulting in you being driven out of the city by the LCPD.

You and the Zaibatshu must flee to London (of course, it will have a different fictional name) to start a new life outside of America, since you are wanted criminals there now. London is run by 2 major mobs and MI6, the British Intelligence. You and the Zaibatshu find a free district and claim it, causing a bit unrest in the other mobs.

The MI6 approaches you're gang first, but the MI6 agents are corrupt, and threaten to turn you over to america if you don't do their dirty deeds. You agree. The MI6 have you wipe out one of the mobs which infest the historical section of London (Big Ben, Old Buildings) After wiping them out, the MI6 betray you, calling over CIA agents to arrest you. However, you are saved by the second mob, who's territory is in the buisness/financial section of London. They help you in your war againsed the MI6 and CIA, until you wipe out the 3 corrupt MI6 agents and raid the american embassy. While in the american embassy, the female leader of the second mob, who is good with computers, wipes out your criminal record, making the LCPD forget who you are and end their chase.

However, when everything seems great and perfect, there's a big problem. You want to return back to Liberty, but the rest of the Zaibatshu want to stay in London and start their empire there. This argument results in a firefight, you have to kill all your Zaibatshu brothers in self defense, until [Leader] is the only one left. Before you can fight with "Leader", he shoots you in a cutscene, sending you to the hospital and completing the mission. When you wake up, "two weeks later", "Female London Mob Leader" tells you that "Zaibatshu Leader" returned to Tokyo to regroup. You follow him, unlocking Tokyo.

You don't recieve a warm welcome in Tokyo however, with the Tokyo Zaibatshu starting a firefight with you outside the airport. However, you are saved by a Tokyo Yakuza Girl, who assumes that you are Yakuza because...you're fighting the Zaibatshu. You play along because now that the Zaibatshu have betrayed you, you need a gang. You do a series of Yakuza missions. You befriend Yakuza Girl. She finds that the Tokyo Zaibatshu are gathering in a little condo on the north side. Before the gathering, you plant bombs there. When the group of Zaibatshu arrive, the bombs go off, killing all Zaibatshu there. "Evil Zaibatshu Leader", who wasn't at the gathering, ambushes you while driving to pick up a package, and a firefight errupts. You kill "Zaibatshu Leader" and end the first storyline.

Paris is unlocked.

The Yakuza assign you to a post in Paris, partially to get you away from Tokyo until the anger has died down. You mention in a cutscene that Paris "has no crime" as you meet your contact. Your french contact has you doing mild missions until you see a Brazillian Freighter dock and talk to French representitives. You decide to sneak on because you need a well earned vacation.

Brazil is unlocked.

Once in Brazil, you use your well earned money at a resort, just to get away from it all. However, when walking through the ghettos, you get mugged, and everything you have is removed. You're only choice is to beat the crap out of the street gangs in Vercetti-Mansion type missions. While shooting out a meeting place of the Red street gang, they surrender, giving you back your items if you do their missions. Of course, if you don't want your items and money, you can just kill them all.

Yakuza Girl arrives in Brazil, angered that you left Paris. You tell her that you wish to return to America, and she mentions about a Yakuza post in Little Japan in "American City"

American City (DC and Chicago) is unlocked

You go to "American City", based on Washington DC and Chicago, and do missions for the Yakuza there. When you finish the missions, one of which involves knocking off a politician, you find out that you didn't kill "Zaibatshu Leader" afterall, and that he was only seriously wounded. Oh No! He left for London with the Zaibatshu remnant, and you return to London to kill him.

Once back in London, there is a "Los Santos Riot" type setting, where the Zaibatshu remnant and the friendly London mob are battling it out in the streets. "Zaibatshu Leader" is on top of "Big Bill" a play on words for Big Ben. He is at the top and you must travel to the top, killing all Zaibatshu. At the top, "Zaibatshu Leader" says that you never learned how to shoot to kill. You are ambushed by 2 Zaibatshu, taking your weapons away, and giving you a Katana. You have a swordfight with "Zaibatshu Leader", and cut off his arm. He runs for his gun. Kill the 2 Zaibatshu guards, get your gun, and put rounds of bullets into "Zaibatshu Leader". When he is dead, you say "just making sure" and throw him off the top of Big Ben, making sure that he is dead. Credits Roll.

BRAVO, BRAVO!

that is a quite amazing story i love it. but i think that you should be claude

[Liberty Overlord]

Claude is dead. The part about being killed by the Zaibatsu is canon, I just wanted my story to let you be the Zaibatsu who killed Claude.

For those who do not know what I'm talking about, R* released a live action 8 minute video about "Claude Speed". It was an intro into GTA 2 (Claude is the character in GTA2). Anyway, it shows Claude pissing off gangs by doing crimes and he eventually pisses off the Zaibatsu and he gets shot in the back and dies. You can read all about it in wikipedia.

[DrSil]

Well, here's my GTA IV story idea. It will involve new characters

You start off in Carcer City in the mid-2000's (between 2003-2010, I haven't though of an exact year) after the events of GTA 3. You play as a 22 year old White/Asian mixed named Jared Lee Park-McCann (corny name, but bear with me) One day, he visits his parents to find them murdered. Afterwards, police officers arrest him and incarcerate him, he is framed for the murder of his own parents.

As the police drive him down to the Police station, two suspicious looking black Emperors (the car from San Andreas) tail the police car he is in. All of the sudden a white elegy drives in front for the police car and someone throws a grenade out of the window and it lands near the police car. It explodes and kills the two police officers, however Jared is alive and rather unscathed, he takes the gun of the dead police officers and shoots one of the aggressors and runs off into hiding, knowing that he is a wanted man by both the police and a mysterious crime organization.

He runs into an alley and comes out the other end of the ally, one of his friends, Seo see's him and gives him a ride to his apartment in Carcer city's Korean community (which will be your first Safe house). Oddly enough your friend Seo seems to know about the going on's in Carcer city ever since Jared was out of town at College. Seo and Jared will do the game's first story missions together, one of Seo's missions will involve going to a Predominately Asian dance and tuner club to meet up with a Korean street gang leader named Sung Kyi Yun.

Once you beat the first set of Carcer City missions, your Korean gang turn on you and your friend Seo will try to kill you. You must make a run for it to the Carcer City International Airport, there you can choose to take a plane to either Liberty City, Vice City, Los Santos, San Fierro or Las Venturas and a new Midwestern-style City that would resemble St. Louis, Kansas City and Chicago. (This is where the storyline will branch)

[K9 Krew]

Well, here's my GTA IV story idea. It will involve new characters

You start off in Carcer City in the mid-2000's (between 2003-2010, I haven't though of an exact year) after the events of GTA 3. You play as a 22 year old White/Asian mixed named Jared Lee Park-McCann (corny name, but bear with me) One day, he visits his parents to find them murdered. Afterwards, police officers arrest him and incarcerate him, he is framed for the murder of his own parents.

As the police drive him down to the Police station, two suspicious looking black Emperors (the car from San Andreas) tail the police car he is in. All of the sudden a white elegy drives in front for the police car and someone throws a grenade out of the window and it lands near the police car. It explodes and kills the two police officers, however Jared is alive and rather unscathed, he takes the gun of the dead police officers and shoots one of the aggressors and runs off into hiding, knowing that he is a wanted man by both the police and a mysterious crime organization.

He runs into an alley and comes out the other end of the ally, one of his friends, Seo see's him and gives him a ride to his apartment in Carcer city's Korean community (which will be your first Safe house). Oddly enough your friend Seo seems to know about the going on's in Carcer city ever since Jared was out of town at College. Seo and Jared will do the game's first story missions together, one of Seo's missions will involve going to a Predominately Asian dance and tuner club to meet up with a Korean street gang leader named Sung Kyi Yun.

Once you beat the first set of Carcer City missions, your Korean gang turn on you and your friend Seo will try to kill you. You must make a run for it to the Carcer City International Airport, there you can choose to take a plane to either Liberty City, Vice City, Los Santos, San Fierro or Las Venturas and a new Midwestern-style City that would resemble St. Louis, Kansas City and Chicago. (This is where the storyline will branch)

yeah dude that sounds good but i don't think that they will have it set in carcer city as so is that other game of rockstar i cant think of the name right now but you should know it

[Gycu]

Here is my story:

London,2000:Jim Smith takes his 2 children,and his wife and starts the car engine but BOOM the car explodes and kills Jim,Martha, and little Jimmy ,but John Smith(the smallest one) is taken to a hospital and falls into a deep coma.

London 2007:John wakes up and tryes to find out why his fammily was murdered and asks his father`s best frien that tells him that Jim was working for the Leone Fammily and they killed his fammilly.

The only sollution for John to revenge his fammilly and find out why it was killed i to work for Leone that moved from Liberty in London,and after the MAFIA trusts him

to find out who killed his fammily and get REVENGE on that person.You start in the front of the hospital .........

What do you think ???