K9 Krew Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 I got the idea of this from the Does this sucktopic by dirty harry. --------------------------------------------------------------- So the you just post ryhme that you have made up, it dosn't have to be rap it can be from classical to death metal, it dosn't matter. So i guess i'll start --------------------------------------------------------------- 6 in the morning cops at my door, And my all stars sneak across the bedroom floor So I grabbed my clip and headed out back, They can’t bring me down when I carry my Mac (yeah) So I’m strolling through the hood, checking my boys Throwing up gang signs and making some noise The OG’s cruising in they 64’ They spray some bullets, and bodies be hitting the floor But here come the bitches, the 5-0 Now, couple of thugs living are on death row. The hoods all messed up its full of crack But it’s better then when they were doing smack Bitches think they hard becoz they do drugs Shit, they aint nutin but fucking petty thugs Now the boys are getting wired off the angel dust And crack den getting cleaned by a Police bust. We get news of some slobs rolling deep So we headed home and grabbed some heat But then we saw the ghetto bird in our hood We told the police to stay away just like they should We got that light shining down on our head Fucking pigs rolling through. And now they dead This is where we live black, the hood Where life is about guns and drugs, and it aint good But we like this way and its how we roll Everybody up in here living off the doll But still they waste that to get their H.I.T Rather than go to school and try to get a degree Yet still we be rollin, we be dippin we be sippin we be rippin We be west coastin we be sittin in our 64s and we be coastin East coast muthafuckers, they be boasting They don’t know us, fool we disrespect them, cool We wear our colours To represent our hood we the chance occurs But it don’t matter what you wear As long as you there In the hood, coz that’s wear it hap-pens We set the trends, not rollin in Benz We be livin off the streets Standin on the corner kickin our beats But mostly doin drive bys And the government cover it up with their lies The gangs and the hood is all we got Either this or we get shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Highwire Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 I really like this one it makes sense (Because it's not made up) I like Ice-T and this song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K9 Krew Posted September 17, 2007 Author Share Posted September 17, 2007 The first two lines are from ICE T song i made the rest up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TG187 Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Those are some very good rhymes man. Keep 'em up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K9 Krew Posted September 19, 2007 Author Share Posted September 19, 2007 Thanks man, i appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate10 Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 Good song. It was fun for me cause it was sorta a story... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huckleberry Pie Posted September 24, 2007 Share Posted September 24, 2007 I like that; maybe if you made this into a full song then I'll be more than happy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmac Posted September 25, 2007 Share Posted September 25, 2007 Good work man i like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 Some saayyyyy (2x) That the... U.S.A. Is gone..... But still when the war is over.... And when I'm older.... I wanna live in a Dead U.S.A. Where the stars are skulls And the stripes are just...... Black and white.... Soldiers fought Some soldiers are dead People talked and people bled... Although you're dying... Up you keep you're head Let's drink a beer to a Dead U.S.A. Another song I wrote what do you guys think about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOXIC Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Overall good, but this is what appealed more : Let's drink a beer to a Dead U.S.A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrLlamaLlama Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Hey, this here's a quick rhyme i put together... The subject may be a little 'dark' but... It's my style... Crimson flames may twist and dance, but the fire of my youth is gone. I thought life could get better, given one more chance, but i see no point to carry on. So it'll all end here, with a 'have a nice day', when I pick up the gun, and take my life away. Move my sordid soul to a higher place, to be born once again. With a new name and face. I have literally dozens of rhymes like this... Both about suicide, and love... Mainly losing love, or having nobody to love... All pretty dark stuff. But i enjoy it. SideNote: I'm not an emo. Dirty harry: i liked your work... I didn't to begin with but it's grown on me... Poems don't always have to rhyme... You raise a good point, this is much better than your last... Keep practising! Soon you'll have it just right. (The balance of having a point to convey, and making it easy to understand) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K9 Krew Posted October 6, 2007 Author Share Posted October 6, 2007 Nice work Llama, i was once into the same sort of style and music. I've moved onto rap because a lot of their songs i can relate to. Sidenote: MrLlamaLlama is not an emo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrLlamaLlama Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Thanks. I'm not really into the music though...strange... Sidenote: MrLlamaLlama is not an emo... lolwut? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Your rhymes are pretty good too Llama, thank's for the compliment. I used to be a rap fan too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 NEW CRAZY SUICIDAL LYRIC DEAR MARYYYY I LOVE YEEE BUT NOW I GONE OUUUT TO AH AH AH KILL MYSELF ROPE ON THE NECK OR A KNIFE ON THE BACK I HAVE MY DEAD EYES WATCHING YOU CRY…. DEAR MARY MARY DON’T CRY MARY COME DOWN OVER… TO TAKE A LOOK AT MY…. MY…….. ROTTEN CORPSE MARY DON’T CRY MARY DON’T RELY ON YOUR PROZAC JUST BECAUSE I WAS A FUCKING MA-NI-AAAAC AH AH AH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K9 Krew Posted October 18, 2007 Author Share Posted October 18, 2007 Woahh thats pretty messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted October 18, 2007 Share Posted October 18, 2007 What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K9 Krew Posted October 18, 2007 Author Share Posted October 18, 2007 I donno, just like it's about rotten corpses and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 Are you in control Are oyu flying high Are you having sex Are you about to die Are you about to try To live two days longer In this cold house of pain and misery Would you care if I was no longer A full person in this age of plastic Amazing stopped being fantastic Dreams turned into a static You are living in the age of plastic You ask yourself Is it all true Does she love you Does he speak the truth when he tells ya the Church will help you Oh she doesn't love you and he doesn't speak the truth about life You will end up with no wife You will feel misery you never felt when you were asleep It took you in so deep That you can no longer hear the beep Of that life clock that has stopped Of the people that are all the same In this age of plastic Where amazing stopped being fantastic Where dreams have lost their startic In an Age of plastic Where hope is no longer To be found In any persons heart or soul You really don't know Right from wrong In This age of Plastic Where nothing seems to be fantastic Just a stopped black and white static. So what do you guys think of this letter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 Pretty good.. I have a really sick mind, as well as having a really weird and funny mind too.. I'm gonna hit you with a chain Then scoop up your brains Shove a pipe down your throat Make you eat gas till your crying Wait till you're lying on your ass So I can devour your heart from your shit covered body! It's all gone foggy, but at least you're dead.. I'm not much for writing lyrics, I'm better at instruments.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaz The Great Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 .... Yeah, I could see where a 13 year old would think that's sick.... Personally, that's nothing if you ask me. Then again, I've seen most of everything, and hardly anything at all bothers me anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Well I don't find it sick, I find it violent. I can't understand why would someone write a song about killing someone like that but then 50 cent lyrics make that sound like Shakespeare on a speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Harry Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 Sorry for the bump and the double post, but I recently wrote a lyric. It's called: Teen Blues. Many of you may think this is typical teen bullshit, but I don't think it is, nut anyway here it is: You feel depressed and sad all the time You don’t feel good with yourself It’s hard to turn the TV on Cos you know all the soaps will Be stereotyping our life And it is not as perfect as you see On TV No oh oh No In a real teenagers life Oh yeah The girls don’t look that good Oh yeah The schools aren’t so perfect too Oh yeah Parents never understand you that good Oh yeah……….. So you think you are under control You think you got things covered Just like the bloke you seen on TV You think solving your troubles like that Is real easy You better wake up fast Cos dreaming like that can’t make you laast Long round here Oh yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaah…………. The girls don’t look that good Uh uh The schools aren’t so perfect too Uh uh Parents never understand you that good Oh yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaah………….. So if you ever see High school musical or any other crap they puke on your TV Remember life is not that easy Yeah yeah television justs gives you an illusion They want to turn you into a puppet so that they can get some more ratings So take a stand Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaah………… The girls don’t look that good Uh uh The schools aren’t so perfect too Uh uh Parents never understand you that good Dedicated to the stupid dumbfucks who created High School Musical. Also dedicated to any teenager who doesn’t watch that crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkali64 Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 Great work man. I would rate it about a 4/5 I had to lol where you wrote "High school musical or any other crap they puke on your TV" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaz The Great Posted December 20, 2007 Share Posted December 20, 2007 Ermmm... That IS a typical teen opinion/attitude.... And why do people have to actually type in "uh"s and "oh oh"s and shit like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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