GTA Don Posted January 14, 2008 Share Posted January 14, 2008 It's a work in progress, you can see the finished version here as well, since I plan to restrict this to +18 at my DeviantArt account.Its not for the emotional Underground© Inside the unused warehouse Raymond tied Frida’s hands to the forklift and proceeded to bite her neck and then drink her blood, it was squirting out like mad, and the fat fucker didn’t hesitate to lap it up, of course the poor girl was scared. “You sicko! When Manny comes here…” “STFU you fucking bitch! Manny’s dead, I ripped his penis off and ate it!” Raymond snapped and he gave her a horrible look, Frida’s face froze with fear. “First I am going to fuck you, and then I’m going to whip you until you’re dead, and then fuck your corpse again, so that you shall become my slave forever.” Raymond said, “I shall become a noob no more, I shall run The GTA Place and I will ban everyone who thinks my sig is crap.” “Please don’t rape me!” Frida begged, but Raymond tore her shirt off and started to rub the palms of his hands against her nipples. “Now tell me that I’m beautiful! Tell me that you will become my slave!” Raymond said, “Say it, and I won’t fuck you.” Frida was terrified, but she wasn’t about to give him what he wants. “NEVER!” Frida screamed, Raymond looked smug. “Big mistake!” Raymond said, he tied her legs on two poles sticking out of the ground, each about a metre away from each other, and Raymond ripped the shorts in two and then cut her underwear in half, so that now she’s naked except for the goggles she was wearing on her head. “Now prepare for the most uncomfortable shag evar!” Raymond shouted, he was about to stick his tiny cock inside her. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!” Then Arucard appears. “Hello noob.” “Who the fuck are you?” Raymond shouted at the vampire. “Let her go.” Arucard said, “What did she ever do to you?” “I need to shag a human, there are no humans left in Mexico, Warner ate them all, I have shagged all the cows and sheep also, now leave me in peace, I have someone to shag.” Raymond. “Do you get kicks from brutally raping a young girl?” Arucard asked. “STFU you cunt, she’s old enough to get in a good position for me!” Raymond said. “She’s only 15 you know.” Arucard pointed out. “So what? I fucked kittens and puppies so why would some girl be any different?” Raymond said. “You’re disgusting.” Arucard said, “Your old sig sucked.” “NAWWWW!” Raymond screamed, he grabbed a sawn-off shotgun and all the zombies under his control started shooting at Arucard, they blew him to bits, and Raymond *Stare in quiet awe* Again! Again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pandora Posted January 14, 2008 Author Share Posted January 14, 2008 I want to fuck a girl called 'Danielle' (Dutch name.. I guess). Well, I just felt like expressing this feeling that I've been having for the pass 12 hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate10 Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 (edited) a a a a a happy kid, again.. Go sad kid. . . . Ahh, floating aliens attack!! Jess. I ♥ U. (: (: The end. [/randomness, nothing] Edited January 15, 2008 by Nate14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azn Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 < Me:lol: More! MOREEEE! You know Raymond's going to do something like that about you when he gets back or just complain about it but nobody will read it so it will be a failure! muahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hansui Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 LET'S PARTY!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azn Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Everyone bring one condom each Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hansui Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 i got two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azn Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 That's not fair give me one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hansui Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 sorry, the other one was already used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkali64 Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 (edited) Can't believe it. This dude Jack from school thinks GTA IV is out. Apparently, he's already played it at his mates house. Edited January 15, 2008 by -Acid- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madlabrador Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Can't believe it.This dude Jack from school thinks GTA IV is out. Apparently, he's already played it at his mates house. Ha, what an idiot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate10 Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Can't believe it.This dude Jack from school thinks GTA IV is out. Apparently, he's already played it at his mates house. Haha, this gay kid Clayton(who got beat up at the dance lol)says he has San Andreas Stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 (edited) Toilet Time! Edited January 15, 2008 by Alucardo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 < Me:lol:More! MOREEEE! You know Raymond's going to do something like that about you when he gets back or just complain about it but nobody will read it so it will be a failure! muahaha The worst Raymond can do to me is spam my comments box And the next part of the story (and a piece from the last) “She’s only 15 you know.” Arucard pointed out. “So what? I fucked kittens and puppies so why would some girl be any different?” Raymond said. “You’re disgusting.” Arucard said, “Your old sig sucked.” “NAWWWW!” Raymond screamed, he grabbed a sawn-off shotgun and all the zombies under his control started shooting at Arucard, they blew him to bits, and Raymond cackled as his boner grew big when he saw a dog humping the mess. "All talk, no action!" Raymond snorted, "There's nothing you can do to stop raping this girl!" but then his smirk disappeared into thin air, because Alucardo regenerated and is now standing before the douchebag. "Are you gonna run to your mommy? No wait, you hate her too much to." Alucardo said, taunting the noob. "SHUT UP!" Raymond screamed, Alucardo pulled out the 13mm Anti-Noob Jackal and shot dead all Raymond's zombie minions. "YOU ASSHOLE!" Raymond screamed, suddenly he realised he shit his pants screaming at Alucardo, now the whole warehouse smells of poo, but then he untied Frida and held her by her hair, Raymond pulled out a revolver and held it to her face, "WHAT YOU GONNA DO NOW! MAKE ONE MOVE AND I BLOW HER BRAINS OUT!!!" Alucardo had no idea what he was going to do, he knew he couldn't save her now. "Hey girl, you want to live?" Alucardo called. "Yes!" Frida shouted, but then Alucardo shot her through her lung, it hit Raymond's heart, and he fell onto the floor. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" He screamed, before blowing up into a million pieces. Alucardo walked up to the girl, who is bleeding to death, "Sorry, I had to shoot you through the lung to hit the noob's heart." and with that, she woke up in Alucardo's home and realised she turned into a vampire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Connor Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Awesome story. You want fries with that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA Don Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 I sure do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gycu Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Welcome to Vice City, welcome to the '80s! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA Don Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 * Dr. Nick voice (guy from The Simpsons)* Hey everbody! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Hey kids. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pandora Posted January 15, 2008 Author Share Posted January 15, 2008 She was kinda eyeing me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 I feel depressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Gorilla Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 LocoRoco Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Philip Rivers is a trash talker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA Don Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 AK-5060796509! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gycu Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 Can't believe it.This dude Jack from school thinks GTA IV is out. Apparently, he's already played it at his mates house. That happened to me too ... lolz n00bz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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