Notorious Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 I like to stalk people. Follow them everywhere they go. They get in a cab or car, I'll follow behind them slowly at a pace equal to theirs, always 2 cars length behind them. They get a hot dog, I get a hot dog, etc. While doing this one day I came across a couple. A dark haired man with medium length hair, and this girl who had gorgeous long blond hair. I followed this couple for miles, from Alderney City to the bright neon lights of Star Junction, they were seemingly happy, joyful, in love with one another. The man cared for his girlfriend, and the girlfriend cared for her boyfriend. They ate happily together, always eating hot dogs, taking in the city. Always staring into each others eyes with deep glee and happiness. I had never seen so much love between two people. I cared for these two as much as they cared for each other. I would do as much as I could to make sure nothing would ever happen to them. Going ahead of them a bit and beating up hobos, walking in traffic ahead of them to make sure if a car were to come I would take it for them, and any other nuisance there could be. Then it happened. After watching them stare at a giant ad in the Star Junction I realized something. I am alone. No one. Michelle was long gone for something I do not wish to bring up. Kiki dumped me when she found out I had been having intercourse with hookers then bashing their heads in with a baseball bat to gain my money back. Carmen never called me again after our first date, mostly due to me pushing her down a set of subway stairs, then stomping her head into the steps. I never tried any other woman due to me thinking it was pointless at this point. I began to feel sad. I thought to myself, "Why can that man not be me?" "Is he any better than me?" "Why wouldn't she think of dating me? Get some coffee, even at least TALK TO ME?" I wanted her. I wanted this mysterious blond with the looks of an angel, and the laugh of a child. I wanted to be that man, I wanted to have what he had, to know that joy of having somebody care for your own well being. I was jealous of the man. I wanted that I could not have, that I desired for so much. The longer I watched them, the longer I wanted to become him, at any cost. I then felt remorse. Saddened of what I had become, a lonesome man stalking random pedestrians. But when the thought of this man touching her, kissing her, loving her... the thought of remorse was thrown to the back of my head as if I had never thought it. I set forth a plan. I would kill him. Take up my new identity as him. And me and the blond would live happily together forever. John and Sara(This is the name I have given them) hail for a taxi and enter one. This was my chance. My moment of truth was here, I could set forth and become what I craved and desired to be. I got in front of the taxi that the couple was in. I pulled the driver out of the cab and killed him in cold blood. The man stepped out, he was ready to kill me. He lusted for blood, the blood of me. I know what I had to do. I empty my shotgun in his face, the man formerly known as John is dead. He is no more, this chapter of his life has ended and mine starts. I am now who I always wanted too be. I steal the taxi and drive away with his wife/girlfriend in the back. I had never been so happy in my life! Then... Screaming. She screams. She wants out. She doesn't want me. She fears me, hates me, loathes me. She feels everything towards me, but still does not love me. How could this happen? Why does she not love me? Is there something wrong with me? What could I have done? I'm thrown into a maelstrom of feelings, mostly guilt, and hatred towards my self. But most of all sadness. She doesn't want me, those words kept ringing in my head. I knew what I had to do. I drive her whilst her screaming like a banshee. I reach my destination. The cliff next to Mikhail Faustin's house. If you've ever seen this part of the game there are rocks and old cars that seems from the '50s, and '60s at the bottom. I rev my engine. She screams even louder. I drive faster, faster, and faster. Her death curling scream gets louder, louder, and louder. We fly off the edge. Everything is then silent for a mere second. This second feels like an eternity. I know what I am doing, I feel no regret. I am also for the first time in a long time; happy. We both plummet to the bottom and die instantaneously. They will never know who killed John, or the cab driver Shafeeq. They will never find the body of Sara or Niko Bellic. The ocean mixed with gasoline fueled fire will ruin any traces of our pasts or future. I then revive at a hospital and steal a Blista Compact and go bowling with Roman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
little_homer Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 Wow man, nice story. You got talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snazzybacon Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 in the beginning i realy felt, that you might have some problems. but then i got it. realy nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hansui Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 dude, you need a girlfriend... btw, pretty nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mpilk901 Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 Nice story, I 'lol'ed at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 I've actually read this somewhere before :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Dbl-Gee Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 a bit wierd but still pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blur Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Either way great story. I was glued to the screen of my computer. Whew. Thats good skill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Theft Auto Australia Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 If you want a Blonde go to craplist.net and date Alex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dahaka Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 Wtf? u need help.................But u have great skill.....the wired ones always do.....just kidding....great story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAWiseman Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 The moral of this story is............ 'FUCK JACK THOMPSON,GTA IV OF IT'S GREATNESS MAKES PEOPLE CRAZY AND GOOD WRITERS!!!' currently it made a good writer out of you (seriously that's some mad skills you got ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lonewᶲlf Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 Wow thats some writing mate. You should write novels or short stories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryder 101 Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 that was great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joelzaar Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 You had a rough child didnt you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 You had a rough child didnt you. You're quite annoying, you know that? Nice story mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macorules94 Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 леле земи си живот Nice Story lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unlimited90 Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 Прочетох я от втория път Yup, nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamadee Posted January 3, 2009 Share Posted January 3, 2009 nice effort, uve got talent to be a story or novel writer. Great Job Hats off..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian11234 Posted May 25, 2009 Share Posted May 25, 2009 good story but i think you need to get a bird and maybe a life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shynkai Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 lol , where do you get the idea to make this story ? you are good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
backdrop99 Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 Haha that's kind of messed up, but you have great talent. I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forum1 Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 This whould be a good michinima... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alvas. Posted June 6, 2009 Share Posted June 6, 2009 Amazing story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nikobellic4ever Posted August 24, 2009 Share Posted August 24, 2009 Damn, that was amazing.... Btw u got talent........... I laugh at the end... When u go bowling with roman.... The first was sad n inspiring.... Good job dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bulletproofboy Posted August 24, 2009 Share Posted August 24, 2009 this was a good story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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