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it's not a song, just a few lines :rolleyes: , i donno if it's great or not, but i've tried :) , at least it's not bout pimps n hoes. to me it makes sense.

so here's my rap:

it's like the devil takes control of ma' soul

n' i can't do nuthin' anymo'

i feel like da world's gonna end n' i'm gonna die

but i still can't see n' understand why

maybe cuz i'm livin' dis muthafuckin' lie

what do you think? ^_^

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I am working on my own song it is far from finished right now .

" I know a guy , who knows a guy, who knows a guy i used to work for "

his name is cam , i saw him at the dam nothing but the jam .

he started to f*ck up his bi*ch drowned in a ditch he wasent rich .

I truly suck at making music so be nice enough to help me out here . thanks .

Edited by frank_tenpenny

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I can't do anything of this nature, so I'll post something blink 182 did...

I know a guy...

He had sex with his sister

He used his dick to pop her...

4 foot blister and I know it's not that cool

he fucked her in my swimming pool

he's got 3 testicles and...

Just realised how much it doesnt rhyme, and the suckyness of it, though it made me laugh the first time. But it's about incest, which is sick :sick:

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Well a song like that wouldent go in the charts it doesent sound like a song you hear a lot on tv or on the radio .

heres a bit of mine

gently caress you couse you run around like you own the block

gently caress you

im still working on it :coolthumbup:

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Uh, ok, here's mine.

Ain't nothing but P thing

I meant a girl, her name was rick.

She rode on my friends big, hairy d**k.

Then she started her nose to pick.

Ain't nothing but P thing.

She caught a hockey puck

Got in my truck

Then we-a started to f**k.

Ain't nothing but a P thing.

Then she ran track.

Injected some smack,

then jacked up on crack.

Then in freakin' shot her in the back!

Ain't nothing but a P thing.

:lolbounce::erm::wacko::evil:

Hah, made that up on the spot. (We had to bleep that for TV)

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here's ma new rap tell me what you ppl think

You don't know me so don't say shit

Maybe I aint how you want me to be but I aint no bitch

I know I maybe look like one but you gotta look inside

Don't wait till it's gone search till it's still alive.

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srry for the double post but here's my new rap:

watching every single step

in this world full of regret

made me feel so powerless

living in a constant stress

makes my life a total mess.

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one one two one two three when you are growing up in the hood you life can be misunderstood got the man on your back o you just got sacked (what}!

the damn man better not touch me dman blackhs aregonna gently caress me up but thats the price you pay for rollin with a gang but if you feelin like a pimp come on brush your shouldrs off these ladys want u come and brush your shoulders off and we aint rollin with drugys or the smack heads cause if i do i im surely marked for dead ,so please dont critisize me for my first ryme so to all of yal i say see you in antoehr life.....

well i hope you like it im sure i did better than mike and i did quote a line from one of JayZ's songs..the felling like a pimp thing.

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Crips fo life

Thug till i die

Every G is High

Don't worry baby

Don't cry

Everything will be alright

I'm a lonely person

I'm living with the G on my own

So that is life

Life is full of lie

Everbody die

I think war wasn't the solution

I'm a fucked up person

Hijack is a big fool

Riot is not cool

Gang life is not good, we are always sad

They kill people and let them do the bad

I'm a little soldier

And my parents said that im a fucker

I know its true because my life was full of darkness

My life is full of Sadness and darkness.

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No more wars

No more gang darks

Let's make light & peace

and this is the only way our parents problems make eaze

Every G is a sad person

when i'm in my gang I felt none

I met my addict friends

and kill our rival gangs.

Everbody die when my friends bangs

No body is alive

except the root of the five

gang makes people cry

many may die.

Stop killing people

help each gang.

Stop the frolicking gang wars!

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We have this up-and-coming rapper in my town who made a "Vote or Die" rap song based off the P diddy campaign. I thought it was funny but he sounded serious.

"Vote or die mother f***er!

Yeah thats just what I said,

You better pull that lever or you gonna be dead!

Pull a bullet through ya head unless you vote,

I'm gonna make sure you don't say another note!

Vote or die mother f***er!"

lmao.

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I'm the sickest linguistically, illicit lyrical misfit, in the business

And probably in existence. What's your consensus?

Study my own syntax statistics since '96

With CPA certified assistance

I made a decision that my standards are above precision

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Part I

If you see me with the fo fo/

You betta run for your life/

Cuz I'll bust on you you punk/

My Boy is ACE and I'm the king of spades/

Im your Latin Hommie that dont have the braids/

Face it hommie, I'm here to stay/

I'm the next Eazy E but I aint going out with AIDS/

This rap shit aint a faze aint a craze/

Its a life style, and I'm flowin' like the Nile/

Dont worry, were here for a while/

They on me cuz I got style/

Just thes words will make you wanna dile/

9-1-1 like on a petafile/

Style is hard to come by, ware I'm from/

And they get locked up to never see the sun/

Friends live buy the gun and die buy the next hommies gun/

And if you run, you just die tired/

Cuz we will, open fire/

Lift your soul Higher and Higher, then hit the floor/

Like 1, 2, 3, and to the 4 when Eazy was nockin at your door/

If you see me with the fo fo/

You betta run for your life/

Cuz I'll bust on you you punk/

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Crips fo life

Thug till i die

Every G is High

Don't worry baby

Don't cry

Everything will be alright

I'm a lonely person

I'm living with the G on my own

So that is life

Life is full of lie

Everbody die

I think war wasn't the solution

I'm a fucked up person

Hijack is a big fool

Riot is not cool

Gang life is not good, we are always sad

They kill people and let them do the bad

I'm a little soldier

And my parents said that im a fucker

I know its true because my life was full of darkness

My life is full of Sadness and darkness.

Aaahh!!! Emo meets rap! :o

I'm the sickest linguistically, illicit lyrical misfit, in the business

And probably in existence. What's your consensus?

Study my own syntax statistics since '96

With CPA certified assistance

I made a decision that my standards are above precision

That's pretty cool, someone had it in their sig at GTAWH. Who's it from?

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